Dont get me wrong, its a nice idea for a strike, bit its a bit long, with too much dialogue.
I believe you can cut the eye of savathun part, imo.
Bur an amazing job. Congrats.
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By the way I made a poll for my next level to publish if you wanna give me some feedback. Also feel free to hit the fanmade tag to browse some other stuff I’ve done if you haven’t already.
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Thanks! Yeah I tried to simplify it however I could but just couldn’t quite nail it down. My other Strike ideas are usually far more concise.