Oh man, I've really missed you.
Seriously, you're one of my favorite people on this forums. Your Cayde-6 story from way long ago? One of the best things I've read in a while. I'm glad you're back: keep up the good work!
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Well, the multi-character chaos continues with... ANOTHER CHARACTER, ha https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/122124663
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Dude, I love it!
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https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/128179004/0/0 And finally back for more
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https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/143271597 I finally finished it
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Thank you so much! Sorry that I was aloof for so long. I had been temporarily laid off at Destiny's release, so I had time to write and game. Working again with a wife and son has kept me way too busy. Does this piece seem a little out of practice? Also, since you're a fan of "One Night Out," Cayde-5 in this is definitely a younger, one wipe less Cayde-6
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This piece doesn't seem out of practice, so much as a different turn. You're now focusing on a lot of characters with a lot of personalities. It's a nice change, in my opinion. Perhaps focus on progressively revealing these characters' personalities, rather than all at once. [spoiler]But that's just my opinion: you're still awesome![/spoiler]
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No, you're definitely right. Going with a fireteam definitely was weird and a bit chaotic to write, but I wanted to get a little description of each out of the way to make their image easier to recall later; hopefully with more conversation their characteristics will seem more fleshed out
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I can't wait to see where this story goes, man. You've established great buildup: keep it up!