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9/18/2014 2:11:30 AM
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I don't quite sure of your intent with this post, but I like it. You put it together very well. :)
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Just a random little short story type thingy. I'm broken emotionally and I feel more like a fragment of myself because I'm so jumbled now. So it was kind of my inspiration for this.
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You should continue using writing as a method to express your emotions, some people consider it a form of therapy. And if you look back at what you've written later on you may find subconscious cues or thoughts in your work that you might not be conscious of right now. That second one is something i've noticed, in both speech and writing it's normal for the subconscious to reveal things that someone might either be consciously hiding or may themselves not be aware of, but do so in a way that only hints at its true meaning.
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I mainly just like doing the whole dark to light thing
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It's not a bad theme, it's been the topic of probably a few poems i've written. If you'd care to read I wouldn't mind sharing. I don't do regular poetry threads much anymore, they often go ignored and the people who do comment just dick around. I don't mind the second part, it's what I expect from this place, but sometimes I like seeing others make honest attempts at writing. They might even surprise themselves.
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Sure I'll see it (:
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Okay, i'm just copy/pasting it from the word file. I titled it, "A Revelation - Hope Reborn". Time goes on, night grows darker. Hours seem to go on longer. The shadow of silence stands unbroken Leaving its misery as a token. The world enraptured by dread so dreary, All of the souls left weak and weary. Hope and joy, like the moon they wane As fear and sorrow drive all insane. And just as life seems dead and gone We hear a new and joyous song. It starts as a whisper, gentle glow And on the horizon the light does show. The Morning Star rises once more To cast its light upon the farthest shores. The gloom and sadness, ‘tis driven away By the newly born hope of dawn’s new day.
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This makes my OP look like poop XD Amazing poem
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Don't sell yourself too short, friend. My first works were terrible, I can't honestly stand to look back at them, but practice does make perfect. And I see plenty of potential in what you've done.
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I'm not going anywhere with it
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You don't necessarily need to go anywhere with the same piece, you can write other things and it'll still be effective practice.
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I just like to write random short stuff like this
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Then keep it up! The value of a piece isn't necessarily determined by its length but by its quality, and I did enjoy what you've done.
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Eh maybe I do some when I get bored
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Never hurts, if there's nothing else you need to do.
