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originally posted in:The Black Garden
2/21/2014 11:26:10 PM
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Thanks for the word haha. What did you like about it? Or rather what made it so awesome?
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if you don't mind if you had the chance to make this into TV series would you take it or pass the offer. cause i want to be that guy who's sitting there behind the scenes doing nothing just support.
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Haha thanks for the compliment man. I don't know what i would do. As long as the crew wouldn't change the story, i guess it would be cool to have it put on screen. Have you read the rest of the story?
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I had copy & pasted most in my Google Drive & Note Pad
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Cool. You plan on getting caught up before 13 comes out?
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Edited by TheAntiroxas: 2/21/2014 11:36:59 PMthe round of Raiders :P if you dont mind can you add the vex at some point maybe the end. [even with we know nothing about them, just that they might have been from the traveler] XD FINGER OF GOD WAS EPIK AS WELL
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Oh i have plans for all of the enemy factions, my friend. Their respective roles will come in due time, including the Vex. I haven't forgotten about them. Their part will just come at a later point in the plot. As for Finger of God, it is one of my proudest creations. I would like to have it in game. What did you think of the ending?
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Mind-Blowing.....
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that Fallen captain doh xD
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I'm glad it delivered. As for the Fallen...well you'll just have to wait a little bit. I'll be able to tell it better when you just read about it in the story. What about the combat in general?
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any tips?! you inspired me to make some stories myself.
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Well, what's helped me is to not get too rigid with the lore, plot, characters, abilities, etc. in relationship to what's been revealed by Bungie to be in Destiny. For example, not all of my characters have three weapons or the balance in weapon types, several have unique melee weapons, the Stingray and Falcons were made up, the class abilities fatigue the user, the class abilities don't match the animations in the game, and some teams aren't limited to three people, and others. Probably one of the most important is to be patient. Don't rush any plot detail or character. Especially the main characters. Refrain from making too many main characters because the focus on them will be difficult to maintain. Try to reduce the number of filler characters whose roles could be trivial. Think of a strong beginning, middle, and end to your plot and fill in the blanks so that they can all fluidly pass from one to another. Keep a good balance of practicality and exaggeration. This is a fiction so it's okay to get a little ridiculous, but don't get out of hand with it. Last point that comes to mind is the danger/threat/enemy. Make sure that they are a true threat. Your story will be more interesting if your characters face a danger that cannot be dispatched easily or overcome quickly. Your characters can't win them all. And when they do, make it a challenge. For now, those are some of the major points i keep in mind. Also remember to make your characters as unique (but tangible) to each other as possible.
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Pretty [b][u]Right ON[/u][/b] i like that you incorporate every character's ability like the Hunter, sneaking out of harms way when the warlock threw the Nova Bomb. [Suggestion] Make a you-tube channel & monetize, Narrate it = PROFIT + you get more known for your amazing stuff in our community [DESTINY] that could also help your guild a lot not like it need's it it has 300 people mine only has about 20, but were still getting there.
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I try my best to keep each experience fresh and exciting. Utilizing the abilities and skills of each class is helpful in doing so. As for the youtube thing, i don't know how that would work...
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Edited by TheAntiroxas: 2/22/2014 12:03:59 AMAlso try using this website, it's easier to keep Chapter's in check. https://www.fanfiction.net/
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I'll have to check it out on my pc later. Phone's not the best at that kind of thing.
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i know how you feel, nice chatting with you.
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Same here. Thank you for the feedback, encouragement, and read. I hope you like the rest of Shachal. And good luck on your own fan fiction.
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the you-tube thing could work, am just saying if you can Narrate it with your voice Heck or someone else if you don't got the time. MoreConsole & DattoDoesDestiny Should Highlight you.
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Edited by SaviorsBlood: 2/22/2014 12:15:39 AMIt sounds interesting but it would take some serious thought. I always figured the readers could hear it as they like to when reading. I can't promise anything but i'll consider it. As for them, art is determined by the critics. If the story doesn't interest them it likely won't be covered.
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