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originally posted in:The Black Garden
1/8/2014 12:52:55 PM
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Great Stuff, really enjoyable reading!
The characters are well defined, I like the short cuts in narrative as well. As Old Mali said previously, could do with some proof-reading.
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yeah I should proof read more but I honestly don't get that much time. I'm reaching the end of my Uni course, after that my proof reading should become slightly better. Thank you for reading also. glad you liked it.
