Upon realising how rubbish this story is and how truly pathetic I am at writting, this story has been removed. Please do not post in this thread as it will be waste of your time. I apoligise for wasting valuable server resources.
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[Edited on 2/23/2005 3:27:29 PM]
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I thought it was okay, add some guns and you should have a better paper in no time. Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you that you don't know rubbish until you've read the "It theory: The origin of the fat".It's hilarious, I'm currently trying to shorten it so I can show it to you guys.But I'm not sure I should in fear of getting mocked/banned/flamed [Edited on 2/23/2005 5:03:12 PM]