Pretty good! You just might want to work on paragraphing a bit, and capatalisation a little too. Overall really good!
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Edited by OutsideRocket: 12/19/2015 5:39:00 PMNp, looking forward to the next! [spoiler]Do you read the lives of three classes?[/spoiler]
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Then if you want, you can join the providence writers, it's basacially a bunch of fanfic writers and fans who just chat about whatever. It's a really fun and chill group, and I'm sure they'd love your stories. [spoiler]No pressure, it's just a suggestion[/spoiler]
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Cool send me the info
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Yeah, you joined! Welcome!
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You can just search it up on the search bar at the top of the screen [spoiler]But before you join, I'm warning you it can get a little crazy[/spoiler][spoiler]But it's still alot of fun and they're pretty good guys (and girls)[/spoiler]