holy crap!!!

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] TW InKoGnIto I would not be surprised if Bungie used this. [/quote] Seriously? This fan fiction/script is great and all, but Bungie wouldn't use it -- ever. Too many royalties and complications would be involved. Besides, I'm pretty sure they're nearly done with the campaign, they've been working on it since Halo 3.

I didn't read it all because it's too long for me to read on the computer, but it looks pretty damn good, i'll read it over the next few days, i'll invite people to look at it. [Edited on 08.08.2009 2:59 AM PDT]

this is good. you should keep it to yourself or someone will steal it, resell it with different names.

I would not be surprised if Bungie used this.

[quote][b][u]Harbinger[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35589354]Part 1[/url] ll [b]Part 2[/b])[/quote][i][b]Long:[/b] exterior docking station, focus on the smaller ship of the pair for a moment.[/i] [i][b]Medium:[/b] interior, bridge of Brute ship the TRIUMPHANT DECLARATION. Two Brutes stand in the center of the Bridge, facing the main entrance, with other Brutes operating the controls on the perimeter. One of the pair wears [url=http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/halo/images/1/16/Red_Brute_captain.jpg]blood-red armor[/url], with black-and-white streaked hair clearly visible between the plating. The other, slightly shorter and more youthful, wears very little armor like the Halo 2-style Brute, and has pure black fur. His hair is shaved in unique designs, including the hair on his cheeks, similar to the Brutes in Halo 3. The armored Brute speaks loudly for all to hear:[/i] [b]NABORUS:[/b] Crewmen! [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on the two Brutes. The older one in the armor, NABORUS, looks at his Bridge crew, now at attention.[/i] [b]NABORUS:[/b] You are dismissed from your duties. I will summon you when we are to make away from the station. [i][b]Medium:[/b] the Brutes of the Bridge shuffle out of the side entrances, leaving only the pair standing atop the floating "island" in the center of the Bridge.[/i] [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on NABORUS as he speaks quietly:[/i] [b]NABORUS:[/b] the Chieftain is waiting. He is an old battle-mate of mine. Do not disappoint me, Lepidus. [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on LEPIDUS as he speaks in a confident tone, puffing his chest out slightly.[/i] [b]LEPIDUS:[/b] I will not, Shipmaster. [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on NABORUS as he stares at LEPIDUS for a moment, gives a half-nod of approval, and keys a control on a panel next to him.[/i] [i][b]Medium:[/b] the main entrance slides open noislessly, revealing a trio of massive figures. The central Brute sports an icy white mohawk and carries a massive gravity hammer. A Brute accompanies him on either side. The one on the left is clearly older, with fading brown fur: GRATTIUS. The one on the right is younger, sports red-brown fur: STRABUS. The trio makes their way to the center of the Bridge. NABORUS and LEPIDUS drop to a knee as they near.[/i] [i][b]Close:[/b] TARTARUS stands above the pair, gives a gruff laugh, and speaks:[/i] [b]TARTARUS:[/b] Rise, friend! [i]NABORUS rises up and stands face to face with TARTARUS, and performs a rough handshake maneuver. LEPIDUS remains in his kneeling position, head hung low in respect.[/i] [b]NABORUS:[/b] It has been too long! [b]TARTARUS:[/b] Indeed it has, Naborus. I shall make some time to start a hunt. [b]NABORUS:[/b] Like the old days. [i]TARTARUS grins wide, and then allows a more somber look come across his face and pauses before replying:[/i] [i][b]Extreme Close:[/b] focus on TARTARUS' face as he speaks:[/i] [b]TARTARUS:[/b] Times are changing, old friend. The Prophets are finally seeing the Jiralhanae for all that we are worth. [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on the pair of Brutes conversating.[/i] [b]NABORUS:[/b] Indeed. [b]TARTARUS:[/b] The holy Prophet of Truth has emparted me on a mission. [i]TARTARUS reaches down to his belt and grabs a hold of the orb from earlier, unscrews the cap, and removes a small shard of sapphire-crystal.[/i] [b]TARTARUS:[/b] What is-- [i][b]Extreme Close:[/b] focus on the miniscule piece of crystal in TARTARUS' massive hand. The Brute moves the crystal forward, thrusting it into NABORUS' grip.[/i] [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on the Brute pair.[/i] [b]TARTARUS:[/b] This... is a holy relic. The Shard of and Oracle. The Prophet of Truth has dispatched orders to re-activate the plasma weaponry aboard your ship. [b]NABORUS:[/b] For what purpose? [b]TARTARUS:[/b] Your ship The [i]Triumphant Declaration[/i] is the new flag-ship of the Jiralhanae fleet of Furious Redemption. You will lead one of three offenses. [b]NABORUS:[/b] But the Sangheili will not allow us to-- [i]TARTARUS snaps a quick reply, asserting his dominance.[/i] [b]TARTARUS:[/b] They are not the ones who make the decisions. The Prophets are. [b]NABORUS:[/b] I... I understand. What am I to lead the Fleet against? [b]TARTARUS:[/b] Further orders will be relayed to you soon. This crystal must be kept safe, as it is a vital component of the next step. [b]NABORUS:[/b] Next step? [b]TARTARUS:[/b] You will know in time. { [i]he gestures toward LEPIDUS, still kneeling with his head bowed.[/i] } And who is this? [i]LEPIDUS stands as soon as he is referred to. He bows his head when he stands straight and allows his Shipmaster -- no, Fleetmaster -- to answer for him.[/i] [b]NABORUS:[/b] This is my nephew, Lepidus. He is my prime officer. [b]TARTARUS:[/b] Nephew... { [i]he snorts.[/i] } Keep your eye on him. I was once an officer aboard my Uncle's ship once as well. [b]NABORUS:[/b] Yes, Chieftain. [i]NABORUS and LEPIDUS bow simultaneously, the younger hesitates slightly.[/i] [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on TARTARUS and his two henchmen.[/i] [b]TARTARUS:[/b] I will leave my two cohorts with you. For the safe-keeping of the Relic. { [i]he gestures toward the older one, with fading brown hair.[/i] } Grattius, { [i]he gestures toward the younger one, with red-brown fur.[/i] } Strabbus. I will be in contact. [i]The two henchmen step away from their Chieftain, bow to him, and move to stand behind NABORUS and LEPIDUS.[/i] [b]TARTARUS:[/b] Be safe, Naborus. I will speak with you soon. [b]NABORUS:[/b] Yes, Chieftain. [i][b]Close, tracking:[/b] follow TARTARUS. The four Brutes on the Bridge bow to the Chieftain, as the alpha Jiralhanae turns to leave through the main entrance. Silence follows him. He exits through the door, which slides shut behind him as the camera turns back into the bridge, detaches from following the Brute, and drops slowly to the floor as the four Brutes on the Bridge stand straight and turn to eachother, just before the doors shut.[/i] [i]Cut to black.[/i] [Edited on 08.09.2009 7:45 AM PDT]

Here is a preview for Halo REACH 2 script. Not sure when it will be done, or even when I will post the next chapter as I start a new job tomorrow. [quote][b][u]Harbinger[/u][/b] ([b]Part 1[/b] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35589441]Part 2[/url])[/quote][i]Fade in from black.[/i] [i][b]Long:[/b] A massive purple-grey mushroom-shaped superstructure hovers in space, surrounded by swarms of Covenant battlecruisers.[/i] [b]Ninth Age of Reclamation (October 15, 2552), Covenant Holy City "High Charity," Sanctum of the Hierarchs, Step of Silence[/b] [i][b]Medium:[/b] interior, High Charity sanctum of the hierarchs. The walls, floor, and ceiling of the chamber are ornamented with mirrored shards taken as trophies from the countless worlds glassed by the Covenant war machine. Lining the sides of the room are 300 Honor Guards, standing at attention. In the middle of the room hovers the Prophet of TRUTH in his throne.[/i] [i][b]Extreme Close:[/b] the camera, mounted on TRUTH's arm rest, focuses on hisleft claw. It twitches slightly, and the doors dozens of meters infront of him groan open.[/i] [i][b]Close:[/b] Focus on the door as it opens, morphing into a brilliant slit of light illuminating a hulking figure, who moves into the room toward Truth, and he passes the camera. He sports brutal armor, grey-blue skin, and a white mohawk. He is TARTARUS.[/i] [i][b]Close, tracking:[/b] follow TARTARUS as he walks carefully towards Truth. The Elites, standing absolutely still, display looks of disguist as the Brute is allowed closer to their holiest leader. TARTARUS reaches TRUTH.[/i] [i][b]Medium, angle down:[/b] TARTARUS bows so deeply that his chest brushes against the floor, and holds.[/i] [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on TRUTH as he speaks to the Brute, his voice amplified by the chamber walls:[/i] [b]TRUTH:[/b] Rise. Come closer, Tartarus, and report. [i]The Elites on screen now display their discomfort as TARTARUS rises and moves closer to TRUTH.[/i] [b]TRUTH:[/b] Protectors: Leave us. [i][b]Medium:[/b] together the 300 Honor Guards straighten, bow, and file out of the chamber.[/i] [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on the faces of the passing Elites; their faces display looks of bewilderment, hopelessness, and abandonment.[/i] [i][b]Medium, tracking:[/b] focus on TARTARUS as he strolls toward TRUTH and drops to one knee three meters infront of the Prophet.[/i] [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on the Prophet's face as he whispers:[/i] [b]TRUTH:[/b] Tell me what you have found. [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on the Brute. He raches down to his belt without looking up and grabs an orb, and lifts his hand palm-up toward TRUTH.[/i] [i][b]Extreme Close:[/b] focus on TRUTH's claw again; he flicks it at the container, which raises from the Brute's palm and hovers toward him, then remains still in midair. The cap unscrews itself, and three miniscule shards of glowing sapphire crystal.[/i] [i][b]Extreme Close:[/b] focus on the crystal shards as the Prophet speaks.[/i] [b]TRUTH:[/b] This is all? [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on the Brute as he replies:[/i] [b]TARTARUS:[/b] Eight squadrons combed the area surrounding the Eridanus Secundus asteroid field and Tau Ceti. { [i]he bows his head lower before continuing.[/i] } Many were lost in the void. This is all there was to find. [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on the crystal shards, floating in place, with Truth's upper body out of focus behind them. He comes into focus when he speaks:[/i] [b]TRUTH:[/b] A pity. [i]The crystals fall back into the orb and the lid screws itself back on. Follow the orb as it drifts into the Prophet's grasp.[/i] [b]TRUTH:[/b] It may yet be enough for our purposes... and one more relic from the Great Ones, as precious as they are, will soon make no difference to us. { [i]the Prophet tucks the container into his robe.[/i] } Make sure the pilots who survived are well rewarded. [i][b]Extreme Close:[/b] focus on the Prophet's face.[/i] [b]TRUTH:[/b] Then execute them all. Quickly. Quietly. [i][b]Extreme Close:[/b] focus on the Brute's face.[/i] [b]TARTARUS:[/b] I understand. [i]Cut to black.[/i] [i]Fade in from black.[/i] [i][b]Extrme Long:[/b] a planet, a mingling of gold and green surface, lists lazily through space, hiding most of its small grey-brown moon behind it. A Covenant Supercarrier flies past the camera, which players will recognize as THE SUBLIME TRANSCENDENCE from the first Reach script. It is accompanied by a smaller CCS-Class Battleship.[/i] [b]0824 Hours, October 16, 2552, Salia System, Fringe of Covenant Empire, aboard Covenant Supercarrier "Sublime Transcendence" in orbit over colony-world "Joyous Exultation"[/b] [i][b]Long, tracking:[/b] the two Covenant ships move through the inky black space, toward a large docking station, and ease into their places for repairs.[/i] [i][b]Medium:[/b] interior, TRANSCENDENCE. The five Spartans of Team Beta huddle hidden in a cramped chamber with only a single slit of an entrance leading in.[/i] [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on DANTE-259 as he surveys his Spartans before speaking:[/i] [b]DANTE-259:[/b] So, Guardian. Why hasn't the NOVA detonated yet? [b]GUARDIAN:[/b] I'm not quite sure, Reclaimer. I will try to find the answer once more. [b]DANTE:[/b] Thanks. Do you know where we are now? [b]GUARDIAN:[/b] Hold on for a moment... ah yes! The ships have docked for repairs. [i][b]Extreme Close:[/b] focus on SIRUS-066 as he interjects:[/i] [b]SIRUS-066:[/b] Sir, may I suggest that we move out? Now? [b]DANTE-259:[/b] Negative. We need to figure out what's wrong with our NOVA. Until then, Spartans we hang ti-- [i]DANTE stops mid-sentence and throws a glance toward the miniscule entrance.[/i] [i][b]Close:[/b] the Spartans of Beta simultaneously spin around and bring their weapons to bear, pointing toward the entrance as a tentacle wriggles through. Before anyone can fire, GUARDIAN yells to them all over DANTE's speaker system:[/i] [b]GUARDIAN:[/b] No! Do not fire! [b]EDGAR-145:[/b] Why not? [b]GUARDIAN:[/b] This is the answer you requested about your "NOVA." [i]The Spartans allow the muzzles of their weapons to drop slightly, and focus on the entrance. The tentacle pushes its way in, followed by the bulbous body of the Engineer.[/i] [i][b]Extreme Close:[/b] focus on KEIRA as she asks:[/i] [b]KEIRA-320:[/b] These things? What are they doing on this ship? I thought they were created by your makers... [i]The Engineer "speaks" through a series of squeals, clicks and burps. GUARDIAN takes a moment to listen to this strange language before answering the Spartan's question:[/i] [b]GUARDIAN:[/b] Yes... apparently, the Meddlers have taken some of the Huragok from their natural environment; the M-Series facilti-- [i][b]Close:[/b] focus on DANTE as he raises a hand to his helmet and clicks a side button, muting his speaker output.[/i] [b]DANTE-259:[/b] Ask him about the NOVA. [b]GUARDIAN:[/b] Of course. My apologies. [i]GUARDIAN asks the question in the same language that the Engineer speaks, and recieves the reply. He relays the translation immediately.[/i] [b]GUARDIAN:[/b] The Huragok aboard this vessel have deactivated your Bomb. [b]DANTE-259:[/b] Why? [b]GUARDIAN:[/b] Protocol dictates that these constructs will allow no harm to come to the Reclaimers. To you. [i][b]Extreme Close:[/b] focus on SIRUS-066 as he interjects:[/i] [b]SIRUS-066:[/b] Always with the Protocol. [i][b]Close:[/b] the Spartans ease down a little and focus on DANTE as he addresses the A.I.[/i] [b]DANTE-259:[/b] If we find a way out of here, will they re-activate the bomb? [i]GUARDIAN and the Engineer have another alien exchange.[/i] [b]GUARDIAN:[/b] Yes. [b]SCARLETT-098:[/b] What are you thinking, Dante? [i]GUARDIAN and the Engineer commence with more exchanges, which are quiet this time, allowing the Spartans to speak.[/i] [b]DANTE-259:[/b] Get off this ship, find another. I have a hunch that this system is used for ship-building. There's bound to be a vulnerable cruiser somewhere. [b]EDGAR-145:[/b] Hopefully with an intact Slipspace drive. [b]DANTE-259:[/b] We leave here through the maitanance access-ways. Same way we got in. Get back to the hangar, snatch a Dropship, and make for the surface. [b]KEIRA-320:[/b] How many ships are operational in orbit? [i]a moment passes where the only noise comes from the hushed alien exchange.[/i] [b]DANTE-259:[/b] Did you hear the question, Guardian? ... Guardian? ... Guardian! { [i]he smacks his helmet.[/i] } [b]GUARDIAN:[/b] My apologies! Our Huragok friend has informed me that there are more like you aboard the second vessel docked at this station. Reclaimers! [b]EDGAR-145:[/b] "Like us"? More Spartans? [b]DANTE-259:[/b] Only one way to find out. Let's move. [Edited on 08.05.2009 11:36 AM PDT]

This script actually deals with the fall (battle) of the planet Reach, not Halo: The Fall of Reach... but Keyes does have a cameo =)

I don't have the time to read all this now, so thread is saved, but I am going to take a guess and say the main character is going to be Jacob Keyes, and it will talk all about the beast we (fans that have read the books) know he is :P Seriously, I can already say damn good job, this looks very well organized, and I can tell you put alot of effort into it.THIS, is what I believe should earn somebody some *Reconnassiance Armor. *Recon(+Spelling Errors)

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] spyderman93 Why would you make this?[/quote]Why not?

Why would you make this?

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Rammal94 Very good script. Didn't quite understand the ending (Although I think in the books they use the NOVA to blow up like 500 covenant ships. Not sure.) but it was very entertaining. [/quote]In the ending the Spartans brought the NOVA aboard the Sublime Transcendance (we never learn how it got there in Ghosts of Onyx, so I took a shot at one possibility). [Edited on 08.03.2009 3:09 PM PDT]

Very good script. Didn't quite understand the ending (Although I think in the books they use the NOVA to blow up like 500 covenant ships. Not sure.) but it was very entertaining.

Cheehwawa, that was f#@&in awesome. I read the whole thing in 3 hours it was so awesome. I hope they make a Halo 3 sequel so you can make an epic story. [Edited on 07.31.2009 6:31 PM PDT]

Awesome story, read it all last night, took me about a good 2 hours to read it all very well written.

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] disgruntledfan2 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ramenloverninja MLG Cheechwawa where did you get the names for your Spartans, just out of curiosity.[/quote]Some from the obscure canon (i.e. Keiichii) and some that I made up (i.e. Dante, because the Forerunner structure is shaped like Hell in Dante's Inferno).[/quote] Didn't Ghost's of Onyx have a Spartan 3 named Dante?[/quote]It did, but the two characters are not related (like how Halo Wars and Halo 1/2/3 had a main character named John). My Dante was named so because the descent into the Forerunner facility mirrors Dante's descent into Hell, guided by Virgil (i.e. Guardian = Virgil, and "Welcome to Dis!" refers to the city of the dead in [i]Inferno[/i]).[/quote] oh I thought your were naming them after poets, it seem to fit a bit

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] penguin *cringes at Halo 3's "To war!"*[/quote] Amen to that. For all that I like in Halo 3, that little gem from Miranda is just plain [i]awful[/i].

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] disgruntledfan2 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ramenloverninja MLG Cheechwawa where did you get the names for your Spartans, just out of curiosity.[/quote]Some from the obscure canon (i.e. Keiichii) and some that I made up (i.e. Dante, because the Forerunner structure is shaped like Hell in Dante's Inferno).[/quote] Didn't Ghost's of Onyx have a Spartan 3 named Dante?[/quote]It did, but the two characters are not related (like how Halo Wars and Halo 1/2/3 had a main character named John). My Dante was named so because the descent into the Forerunner facility mirrors Dante's descent into Hell, guided by Virgil (i.e. Guardian = Virgil, and "Welcome to Dis!" refers to the city of the dead in [i]Inferno[/i]). [Edited on 07.28.2009 9:35 PM PDT]

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ramenloverninja MLG Cheechwawa where did you get the names for your Spartans, just out of curiosity.[/quote]Some from the obscure canon (i.e. Keiichii) and some that I made up (i.e. Dante, because the Forerunner structure is shaped like Hell in Dante's Inferno).[/quote] Didn't Ghost's of Onyx have a Spartan 3 named Dante?

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ramenloverninja MLG Cheechwawa where did you get the names for your Spartans, just out of curiosity.[/quote]Some from the obscure canon (i.e. Keiichii) and some that I made up (i.e. Dante, because the Forerunner structure is shaped like Hell in Dante's Inferno).

MLG Cheechwawa where did you get the names for your Spartans, just out of curiosity.

CHEEWAWA what have i told you about writing huge novels! lol you have a knack for threads like this keep up the good work~sweeney

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa Thanks for all the editing help, Jacob, I went through and fixed the grammatical errors. Glad you enjoyed the script... I just love to put the stuff from my imagination into words. I'm working on the sequal now, so you're sure to see some returning characters as well as some new Covenant-Covenant relations... these not so hospitable.[/quote] Cool. I'll clean up all your messes for that one too when it's finished.

elites say wort wort wort not wah hah hah xD awesome story. if only the game would be this good. i dont think that the xbox can handle those large scale battles xD -keep it up

Thanks for all the editing help, Jacob, I went through and fixed the grammatical errors. Glad you enjoyed the script... I just love to put the stuff from my imagination into words. I'm working on the sequal now, so you're sure to see some returning characters as well as some new Covenant-Covenant relations... these not so hospitable. [Edited on 07.24.2009 9:05 PM PDT]

I forgot to write that i love the way you show family. The way Xytan and Raum are shown is great because it shows that the Covenant aren't just heartless bastards, they actually have feelings and can love.