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A Novel Idea (Writing RD and Critique Thread)
Welcome to the aptly-named Writer's lounge [i]A Novel Idea[/i]. Here, would-be authors, part-time writers, and anyone with a creative mind can share their Rough Drafts of writing and fan fiction.
Complimentary links will be created if and when they need to be, but just post whatever you come up with, and let other people voice their opinions on your work.
Criticism is always welcome, so long as it isn't straight up slander. Enjoy!
IMPORTANT EDIT: for shits and giggles, if you ever feel like writing a story with multiple chapters or long blogs of fanfiction, incorporate this thread in your work as an Easter egg in some way, shape, or form.
Example: "why don't we take Bakini Bottom and push it somewhere else?"
"Hey, now there's a novel idea."
OR
"This guy I talked to, he's, uh... He's part of a PMC my organization works with. I forget his name and he's obsessed with old rock and blackjack, but he's one hell of an asset."
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15 RepliesSo, I have an idea for a story. The year is 2472, and humanity has basically fu[i]cked[/i] itself over by the invention of large "Arrows." Robotic titans. With this invention, humanity skyrockets forward, technology advancing quickly due to the fact these "Arrows" can explore any terrain, and explore even the depths of space. And now, New "Arrows" are being invented with alien materials. Human agmentations are now possible, creating unstoppable super soldiers. This quickly goes to Hell though when Trinity Incorporated, a military force completely takes over, an army of new "Arrows" and "Trojans" outfitted with incredibly advanced power armor making them unstoppable. And that's not all. Trinity Incorporated continues to push the boundaries, making Literal fu[b]cking[/b] super hero's. Only they aren't hero's. And now, T Inc has the world in its grasp, and controls everything, and everyone must take "The Injection" daily. The injection clouds the mind, and adds a lethal gene to the brain. At any moment T Inc can kill you with a simple mouse click. And now, Hope rests on a Shadowy Organisation dubbed "The Steel of freedom" a group of Assassins and teenagers armed with rusty weapons and a few mark 1 "Light" Arrows. And now, they are literally humanities last hopes of ever being free again. Sound good?
