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This was pretty much my first story, but here ya go. Before we begin I'd like to express the three types of special text I'll be using. Bold is emphasis, italic is omnipotent being telling the parts without the main, and underlined is deeper conscious. [b][u]Arttu and the Ahamkara | Complete[/u][/b] [i]He stands in the shadows, waiting for the next guardian he'll send on the way to their destiny. The nine command him.[/i] Arttu walks slowly to Xur, he didn't want to be noticed. Today Xur was below the FWC though so it was pretty obvious to any who saw him walk down those steps what he sought. Arttu mastered the ways of the gunslinger, and with his trip mines he was nearly unstoppable. Setting the trap was easy, it's deciding who to lure first that's hard. "Greetings guardian. Do you wish to see my wares?" Xur called as Arttu approached. "You know that's why I'm here. What have you today? I've heard rumors..." Arttu was cut off by Xur, he didn't speak; simply held out the gauntlet. The gauntlet clearly crafted from the now extinct ahamkara. The rumors were true. "...how much?" Arttu asked. It was clear Xur knew he wanted it, the price would probably be higher. "All I seek is the coins you carry." That wasn't much, only about 15, why was Xur giving me a deal? Probably better not to ask. "Deal." Arttu replied, handing Xur his coins. Arttu walked away, past dead orbit, past the sights of Holliday and the vanguard frame, out to the wall overlooking the city. He put on his new armour. [u]Venus[/u] ~ [i] The titan felt the bullet slam into the back of his head, it didn't matter though, his helmet could stop a Cabal slug. He quickly turned to meet his opponent but saw nothing but the whip of a cloak, long and thin black with a grey circle at its base. He recognized that cloak, it belonged to Arttu, he had been stopping him this entire match. They were the last two left, and the titan was proud and thought Arttu saw who it was so he turned to run, he was wrong.[/i] They were in the Shores of Time, Arttu was ready to win. He shot the titan and turned to run, back from point C through the cave to wrap around back to B. He stopped in the cave, this was where he'd set his trap. [u]not there, oh bearer of mine[/u] A chill went down his spine and he started walking a little more, this was where he'd lay his trap. [u]yes, now the titan will [b]burn[/b][/u] He tossed his trip mine and crouched into the corner, just poking out enough for that titan to see him. [i]The titan gazed into the cave, he quickly saw the barrel of Arttu's scout rifle poking out from the corner, and didn't see that familiar flash of that dreadful trip mine. He charged into the cave, fist of havoc ready.[/i] ////BANG\\\\ [u]yes titan, burn[/u] A now familiar chill went down Arttu's spine again, the match was over, he had finished it. ~ in the tower ~ "You cheated somehow!" The titan explodes at Arttu. "I stopped to check for that Damn trip mine, it wasn't there!" Lord Shaxx stepped between them. "Arttu did not cheat, I was watching closely. He considered throwing the trip mine where you would see it, but must have realized because he placed it farther ahead." He said calmly but firm. The titan walked away mad, muttering under his breath casual slurs about hunters in general. "That was impressive guardian." Lord Shaxx said, a smile in his voice hidden by his helmet. "It was for situations like that, that i created the crucible. You will go far." ~ [i]Arttu doesn't sleep well that night.[/i] Arttu leans up against the railing, looking down at the city he protects below. It was peaceful. Everything seemed...viscous? Lately like everyone around him was a wild dog baring their teeth. The city burned. [u]Waiting[/u] He made his way to the cryptarch, people stepped up to him holding engrams to be decrypted, but they didn't touch the ground. One guardian received a shard from his and he actually bit at Master Rahool. [u]Ryluth[/u] He went to the Arach, looking for new boots, and found they all felt as if they were a small horrible animal. Not fitting snugly on his slender legs, but devouring them. [u]Venus[/u] He made his way to the Speaker, perhaps there was something wrong with him, everyone was smiling and watching him. Their mouths were over stuffed with large teeth. [u]Ishtar[/u] He noticed Xur by the large doors, his hood was down, he saw his face was nothing but a large toothy smile. They were more like fangs, fitting snugly within each other. But still, he seemed somewhat sad, as if he had played a cruel joke on Arttu and now regret it. [u]Search[/u] He climbed the stairs and saw the Speaker, his ghost was gone, back turned to him. The Speaker turned, his mask was removed, there was nothing. [u]Peace[/u] [i]Arttu shot awake in his bed.[/i] "...something..."Arttu said to himself panting in a cold sweat. "...is on Venus..." He stood up from his bed. "...and I think I know what." ~ [i]Far off in the Ishtar Sink on Venus Ryluth waits. He is a surviving ahamkara. When the order was put to end their existence a deal was struck, they would not interfere with the human race, and the humans would leave them in peace. Who knows what may have caused him to start speaking to Arttu. All we can say for sure is that Arttu is listening.[/i] I touch down in Venus, there's an ahamkara here I just know it, but where? Why has it been speaking to me, and what does it intend to show me here? Arttu sets off on his sparrow, cloak billowing in the wind behind him, he passed fallen and vex alike just waiting to feel that chill. He made his way to the citadel, heavily guarded by the vex, and felt it. That horrible chill, that horrible chill that he'd grown to love. He was closer now. There were guardians beneath him, someone was hurt bad, they just stopped a vex sacrifice. He kept going though, he knew the ahamkara was close. There were two minotaurs standing in his path, he made short work of them with his trip mine. They didn't even fight back, almost as if they didn't see him. [i]Ryluth wakes from his slumber, knowing Arttu approaches. His time would be coming soon, and Arttu would be the catalyst to his power.[/i] Arttu made his way farther than he has ever before, his missions from Cayde-6 seemed to avoid this place, but he began to hear something. Something in the back of his mind was guiding him, making sure he got to where he was needed to go. There was a large mountain in the distance, he knew the quickest path. It came to a sheer drop, with a narrow path along the wall, but he knew where not to step. There was a cave, and something new spoke, something that didn't want him to go inside. He ignored it. [i]The ahamkara sighed, knowing his visitor was at his doorstep. He chose this place because it felt formal and traditional, a guardian comes to the mouth of a cave with a question, and a voice answers. But this, this would be different, this guardian would come inside the cave and ask no questions. Only listen.[/i] ~ Arttu stood against the railing again looking over the city, gazing out over the peaceful calm of the world below. He had no memory of going to Venus, he had no memory of his dreams of teeth, but he had an urge... An urge to do something he didn't quite understand. Arttu had a deeper understanding of things now it seemed, like he almost felt the flap of the wings of the birds in the tower resonate in his head, like...if he wished it...He could stop them in mid flight without even moving. [u]slow[/u] A chill ran down his spine, but also the spine he wore on his arm, he liked it. He concentrated on those birds, on their wings, on the resonate thud growing louder, and then... slower. The birds no longer darted across his view, but gently floated past, almost as if they didn't need to flap but were told to. The chill began to sting, and then it was gone. The birds darted out of his vision and down below to the city. Had they actually slowed? He thought about it, and decided it was impossible. Perhaps he should see the Speaker about taking a leave of absence. Then he remembered something, not entirely though, just that half thought of a memory running away from you. The speakers face, a solid black...no not solid, a deep black with something inside...Something with teeth, and the memory was gone, but the unease was still there. Maybe he should see Cayde-6 about taking that leave... [i]Lord Shaxx had been keeping an eye on Arttu since the other day when he had shown signs of being guided. He was sure it was nothing, sure that the Hunter was just clever and really got the drop on that enraged titan, but if he did stop... if he did check for the flash in that cave...There was no way he could have missed it. Shaxx had a sinking feeling in his stomach that the titan did look, that the titan looked for the flash and didn't see it even though it was there, because to him...It wasn't.[/i] "Ah! Arttu!" Lord Shaxx boomed as Arttu walked by. "Back to try your strength in the crucible? Back to show off your skills with that deadly trip mine of yours?" "Actually Lord Shaxx, I was going..." Arttu was cut off. "C'mon guardian, just one match. Word has spread and people want the challenge of going up against you!" "...Yea sure, one match." ~ Rusted Lands ~ /Maybe I am fine, Arttu thought, being in the field again feels natural. Like this is where I'm meant to be./ (Continued in comment)
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  • Moon, Archer’s Line The surface was barren, but for a small floating blue light and some dregs here and there. The dregs+ observed the light, unsure if it was machine or magic. They saw it stop over a body. A blue beam shot out. It was then they knew something was wrong. He opened his eyes. He saw a small grey machine floating above. He heard a voice: ”Guardian? Guardian can you hear me?” He realized then it was coming from the machine. It had a soft, gentle voice, like his mother. Oh, god his mother. She had been cooking dinner, hadn’t she? He remembered perfectly: it was a day like any other, he went to the theatre with his friends. He had come home to find his house half collapsed., his mother, his brother, his father missing. The thrall then came out of the shadows and leapt on him. The last thing he remembered was the pain, the searing pain in his abdomen. “ My name isn’t guardian,” he heard himself say, “It’s Jatren Herrion.” “I’ll explain later, but for now we have to get you to the Tower.” “The What?” “The tower, the home of guardians like you.” Just then, a fallen skiff came down, carrying a glimmer extraction crew. “ We have to stop them!” yelled the machine. “How?” he asked. “I’ve got it somewhere. Ah! Here it is!” A rifle landed in front of him, seemingly out of thin air. “Burst-fire weapon, from Hakke. Aim for their heads” Jatren picked it up, and it felt so natural, like he was born for this. He traveled to three locations, and each time, he sent the extraction crews to their maker. Pt. 2 coming soon in reply

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  • Comment this in the original post, not my comment haha.

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  • Oh my God I am an idiot I am sorry. I just followed your link to the post haha

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  • Yea, haha I figured as much.

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  • Continued part 1 Arttu made his way from capturing C to go capture B, there were already members of the opposing team there, but he was ready with his golden gun. He jumped up onto the platform ready to rain down his deadly shots on them. [u]blink[/u] Arttu jumped once more and disappeared. He was in a dark and terrible place, a place he'd never seen before, and then he was back all memories of that place gone from him. He lands behind the opposing team, they didn't know where he came from, he just appeared summoning his golden gun. ///BANG BANG BANG\\\\ They were gone. [i]Monitoring The match, Lord Shaxx's furrows his brow in disappointment. "...I was right... I have to tell the vanguard."[/i] ~ The match ended and Arttu was called to return to the tower immediately, curious he didn't stick around to talk to the fellow guardians, not that they wanted to [b]talk[/b] with him anyway. He made his way to where Lord Shaxx always stood, and found him not there, he was down with the vanguard. What could Shaxx and Cayde-6 want with him? "Please, sit down Arttu." Ikora Rey said gently offering him a seat. He sat, everyone of importance stood around him just looking, everyone except the Speaker, which he was relieved for. They weren't glaring though, only looking, as if they were looking for something on him? No...in him. "Where have you been recently?" Cayde-6 asked abruptly breaking that eerie silence. "Uh... The crucible? We were at the shores of time yesterday, and the rusted lands today..." Arttu stammered, his face getting red. Could they have meant Xur? Was he in trouble for purchasing the spine? Many others had purchased many more things, and they were fine, Xur even comes every week! He couldn't be that hated. [u]So foolish, oh bearer of mine, they speak of Ryluth.[/u] The chill was so intense Arttu actually chattered the name of that forgotten ahamkara. Shaxx looked from Cayde-6 to Ikora. "Cayde-6, he's your student, but Ikora the ahamkara fall under the warlocks attention. With that name, and what I witnessed him do today, I think we can be sure it's back." "What exactly did you do in the rusted lands?" Ikora asked looking deep into my eyes, no not looking, searching. She was searching for the answer deeper than I was able to give. [u]You blinked, oh bearer of mine, why don't you tell them how you walked through the void. Not an easy feat for a warlock, let alone a Hunter.[/u] Ikora gasped. "He... He blinked." Ikora said shivering. "Yea so? Hunters can do that too Ikora." Cayde-6 said smugly looking at Zavala. "You don't understand, a hunters blink is just incredible speed, so fast it's like you disappear and reappear. But a warlock, a warlock steps through the void itself, and that's what he did." "So you're saying he's capable of blinking through the void? How exactly does that prove anything?" Zavala asked, speaking up for the first time. "It's extremely difficult to do so. No offense, but it's not just like running on a straight line and punching really hard. It takes most almost a year of practice. And others even longer, and no offense to you Cayde-6, but with no teaching I doubt any Hunter could, and even with teaching I'm doubtful." [u]It seems your vanguard has gotten smarter since last we met, oh bearer of mine, but I doubt Ryluth will mind them knowing a little more...before they [b]burn[/b]. Oh but you don't even hear me do you? You're off, standing alone.[/u] ~ Arttu leans up against the railing, he stands alone, looking down at the city he protected below. It was peaceful in an odd way, listening to the roar, it calmed his mind and set him at ease. The city burned. He turned to head to the cryptarch, but he wasn't there. His stand was torn apart, and a guardian walked out with a new engram under his arm. He seemed to move as if the air was thicker around him. He decided to go to the Arach, but met with him on the stairs. Jalaal would take a step, only to vanish and appear closer to Arttu. His legs are bleeding. He made his way to the Speaker and his arm grew numb. He looked at it to see what was wrong, and was shocked to find his new armour missing. Of course it was missing, it was with his body on another plane. He was about to enter the Speakers chambers, but he stopped. He was being watched...no simply observed. Someone wanted to see if they would be noticed, it was Xur. This time, his hood was up and his face unseen, not that Arttu recalled anything previously. "Ah, guardian." Xur beckoned Arttu over. "You must not climb yet. You aren't ready. The nine have sent me, but I wait on another plane. Find me." He turns back to the Speaker, and hears...laughter. This wasn't the Speaker's voice, it was old and powerful, insane and cryptic. It called out to Arttu. "Isn't reality just the most delicious flesh?" ~ [i]Arttu was thrust back into his body from that plane that Ryluth created. His dreams would stop now, his purpose was served. Ryluth had his revenge on the city, it's precious wall has fallen.[/i] No one was around, he still sat where Ikora told him to, and there was smoke. Arttu got up, it felt like he'd never walked before, and made his way back out to the courtyard. Smoke rose from the distance, and it was clear what had happened. Somehow the wall had fallen...no just shattered, as if it were made of brittle stone. The city below was burning. The dreams came crashing into him..were they dreams? They felt more like a separate him, walking around a fake tower. This was all of him, this was the real tower, and that was the real city, and it was burning. Xur was somewhere, wasn't he? He had something to give Arttu, just like he gave him the spine. What was it? He couldn't remember, did he ever know? Was Xur real in that place? Was he really there? Xur could wait right now though, the city was dying. The Fallen took advantage of this golden opportunity and stormed in. This was his fault wasn't it? His fault for buying that spine from Xur, somehow it gave...Ryluth power to attack the city. Arttu came to the railing, looking down at the city he's failed to protect. It was horrible in an obvious way, the roar of the flames and the screams of the people. It chilled him down to the bone. He turned to see Xur standing over where cryptarch normally would. Arttu knew what to do, and Xur was the first step in completing that. He didn't know how just yet, but he knew Xur had the answers. "Greetings guardian." Xur said as he approached. "This is the last way the nine plan to interfere. Your decisions will be your own. You must choose wisely." Xur handed Arttu a rocket launcher. It felt powerful. This was how Arttu could defeat that damned ahamkara. He has made his choice, with dragons breath by his side, he would win. ~ There was no time to waste, the city was dying and Arttu felt the blame was his. He rushed to the lower levels and joined the fight, his new rocket launcher dragons breath in his hands. Captains, vandals, and dregs, so many dregs, ran throughout the city. People were slain in the one place they felt safe. Standing atop the rubble of the wall was their Kell, he must have heard and wanted to witness what would surely be the end of the last city. Arttu found other guardians being led by Shaxx, he decided he should avoid both him and the vanguard, he kept moving. He came across another group of guardians leading a fight of their own, they were losing. He fired. The blast was impressive, but what was more impressive was what was left after the blast. A solar flare hung in the air where the rocket detonated, burning all of the fallen to ash. [u]Oh yes, oh bearer of mine, burn them all. Burn everything.[/u] Arttu ignored the voice and kept moving. He wasn't burning for the spine, he was burning for the city, and to make up for his mistakes. "Hey you! Atreyu!" Someone called in the distance. Arttu looked around, did they mean him? There was no one else to be seen, so they must be talking to him. The voice that called came with a body, they approached. "Arttu...actually... but yeah?" "We need you and...that thing you have in the front lines, Cayde-6 saw you dispose of those fallen, he wants you to be on your way to the wall." Said the man. "Yeah, okay, just lead the way." Arttu replied. They made their way through fallen, and civilians, and guardians, and the corpses of all three. He was the cause of all this death, how could he ever repent for something he didn't even remember causing? They were closer now, the Kell's eyes shimmered in the flames, this would be the final stand that decides if the city falls. Arttu was ready. He aimed dragons breath. And he fired his last shot. It soared through the air right for the Kell, it passed through the Kell and didn't detonate. Everything seemed to stop for Arttu, he saw reality around him now, and what he thought wasn't true. There was no destroyed wall, no Fallen attacking the city, no mysterious guardian whose voice now sounded so familiar, the voice of the Speaker? No, the voice of the fake Speaker, the one with a deep face that hid something...something horrible...with teeth. [u]Now, oh bearer of mine, your last city will burn[/u] (Continued in comment)

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  • Continued part 2 The rocket made contact with the wall. And it burned. Alarms went up. And everything around Arttu fell away. His vision went black. But he had to be strong, had to finish this once and for all, his vision came back. He summoned his sparrow, and shot off for the hangar. He couldn't be trusted in this fight, he had to finish it from where it started, everything around him blurred and started to shift, people came out carrying guns and aimed them at him. He bit his tongue and saw there was no one there, no one with guns, just the city streets. Luckily, empty. ~ Arttu left the city behind. He was the cause of the wall falling, Ryluth had tricked him, and now was his time for revenge. Arttu felt horrible about leaving the city, but this was the only way to actually stop it. He made his way back to Venus, not even stopping at the enemies that ambushed him. All he cared about was killing that damned ahamkara. He came around a corner and a shock grenade landed on the nose of his sparrow. ///ZZZZAAAPPP\\\ Arttu leaped from the sparrow at just the right moment and rolled onto the ground. He jumped up and shot the dreg in its head, ether flew out of his neck. He turned... Everything was red. He was in a tunnel, on a hill facing downwards, red sand loose around his boots. ...He was on Mars? How did he get here, the memory of rage and determination to defeat Ryluth gone from him, why was he here? The newly implanted truths came to him, he was on a patrol mission for Cayde-6. He summoned his sparrow and returned to his mission. As he went he ran into a few legionaries, they were simple to defeat, but...There was ether? Coming from their necks as he shot of their heads? Everything changed, and Arttu felt dizzy, the burning reds and soft sand became vibrant blues and greens and hard soil, he was on Venus, fighting off Fallen. The sensation passed and reality set in again, Ryluth is playing with him, how could he ever beat such a beast? [quote] He's your student, but the ahamkara fall under warlock attention[/quote] what did that mean? He continued. Through the citadel and beyond, he came to a mountain, the place was familiar but the path to the top was forgotten. It was his spine that guided him up the first time, but why would it again? [quote]burn[/quote] how many times had his spine said that? Could it be bargained with? "Listen, I don't know if you can hear me, or if you ever even spoke, but I need you to guide me one more time. Once at the top I will burn Ryluth." A chill passed through him. [u]You wish to burn an ahamkara? You can't even defeat an ahamkara, oh bearer of mine. Only a warlock could, and you are only a Hunter.[/u] "But we wear bones as armour, I'm wearing you, some Hunter had to beat you." [u]Yes, a Hunter did best me, oh bearer of mine, but I was so young. And I haven't quite left have I?[/u] "Fine, but I have something that can beat him, and he knows it! Why else make me believe I was on Mars? Guide me up, and I will be the Hunter who burns an ahamkara." Arttu said confidently. There was no response, no chill, had he just imagine the entire conversation? No matter, he had a mission to finish, with or without help he would climb. Arttu came to a steep ledge, as he took a step he felt a chill and he pulled his leg back. After thinking he placed it closer to his other foot, he continued up the mountain certain the spine accepted the offer. The peak wasn't far, and the mouth of the cave could be seen, the face of the fake Speaker. He had to be strong, confident, he continued. [u]He eats reality as if it were flesh off an animal...[/u] The voice was unexpected, they came to face the cave, why did it choose to speak up now? [u]...He isn't scared of you, oh bearer of mine, he was just simply hungry.[/u] There was a rush of air, something soared into the sky, high...high above Arttu casting a shadow down on him. It was Ryluth, and this had been his plan all along. A torrent of flame came down at Arttu, followed by Ryluth, he dodged just in time to avoid use fire but not the claws. Ryluth grabbed Arttu and carried him high into the air. "Did you actually think you could beat me? Did you actually think those bones on your arm would help? Your city will fall and it's all because of you! You have fed me such delights, and now I am much stronger, now I feast on your city itself." The beast began to laugh. Arttu was thrown to ground, bones shattered, he stared up at the shape above him. He lifted his dragons breath, bracing it against the ground next to his throbbing skull. There was a glint in Ryluth's eyes, he inhaled, Arttu fired, the rocket shot straight into Ryluth's mouth. [i]In The city the guardians lay down their weapons, the wall was burnt but it didn't fall, there were no Fallen in streets, there was only death. Lives of civilians and guardians alike were lost here, but no one understood how it had happened.[/i] The blast of the rocket launcher going off against the ground beneath Arttu knocked him out. When he finally woke, his ghost hovering above his face, he saw dragons breath broken next to him and pieces of charred bone around him. [u]I'm impressed, oh bearer of mine, why don't you collect your rewards.[/u] He did. The ribs of the ahamkara and the skull were his by rights. Even then he didn't know why he wanted them so badly, perhaps to prove his feat to the vanguard, perhaps to show his forgiveness. But deeper Arttu knew. He knew what he wanted with those bones of his greatest foe, he wanted to build a cage, and one day he would. [b][u]epilogue[/u][/b] [i]The room grew quiet. The old man was about to tell a tale. A tale of long long ago, when people lived in fear, and when people were sent to fulfill their destiny. No matter how horribly painful, no matter how devastating, no matter how disastrous it was.[/i] It used to be there was only one city, heh can you believe that? One city protected by heroes that walked in light, who watched over us from a tower that reached for the stars. There was one hero, his destiny was to slay a dragon, but it didn't end there. His name was Arttu, he was what used to be known as a hunter, he was given a choice. After his battle with the Dragon was over he could destroy what he brought back or he could craft it. It was the bones of the Dragon. He made Chest armour from the bones and he called it The Cage of the Burned. It was because this that he became known as Arttu the Burnt. The new armour he wore whispered to him, it was the voice of the dragon he defeated. It was his plan all along to coax Arttu into the fight, and he succeeded. While Arttu wore the chest he had an immense new power, all his abilities and even some of his guns would deal terrible power. But it came with the cost of that dragon whispering, it drove him insane.

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