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Halo: Heretic or Hero?---An Elite's Story (Chp2)
[quote]Welcome, reader, to the Sangheili Chronicles, fully rewritten and remastered and guaranteed to deliver to you a wild ride of epic proportions. Here you will find the long-awaited trilogy that's been two years in the making. I hope you enjoy reading as much as I have enjoyed writing.[/quote]
[b]Synopsis[/b]: The Human-Covenant war is slowly drawing closer to its fateful conclusion, but the story of the Master Chief is not the story we follow in this saga.
Among the Honor Guards who fought to protect the High Prophet of Regret on Delta Halo, there was a single treacherous Sangheili who abandoned the Prophet in his greatest time of need--his fateful confrontation with the Master Chief.
Now, the only son of Daka 'Solonee must decide his own destiny, but he will need help from his unlikely group of friends and allies along the way. Together, through their struggles and triumphs and dark memories, they will fight to the bitter end in search of a long awaited time of peace.
[b]Contents[/b]
[i]Prologue---I am Sangheili[/i]
[i]Chapter One---Regrets[/i]
[i]Chapter Two---To Walk the Path[/i]
[Edited on 12.02.2010 1:20 PM PST]
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I never read the first one, but I already know that this story is going to be brilliant :D I liked the self-examining description of the Sangheili at the beginning, that was very interesting. The two characters seem intriguing as well :) You handled the mystery very well, and the ending was very powerful and even more mysterious. There could have been a bit more description of their surroundings though; I found it very hard to imagine where they are because you gave us no starting point. But aside from that, I loved it and can't wait to see where you take the story :D Your spelling and grammar was fantastic. I only noticed one very minor errors; "gods" should have a capital g, so it's "Gods". As I said, extremely trivial mistake, but still :) Overall, it was fantastic :D Can't wait for more!
