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Edited by Merauder777:
1/13/2015 8:31:58 PM
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Re-Awoken Part 3 of a Warlock's Destiny
Outside the door the sun’s light was blinding, a stark contrast to the very active graveyard they had just escaped. Ignoring fatigue and the immediate low visibility they kept running, trying to get as far away from the ship as possible. Just shy of 20 minutes had passed before they found a suitable location to hide and rest.
Her ghost said, “Well that was a close one.” The awoken responded with an exhausted roll of her head, looking her ghost in the eye. She slumped to the ground, leaning against the side of the building. After she caught her breath her ghost began talking again.
“So… we didn’t get to properly introduce ourselves back there, as I stated I am Sona, your ghost now, I was sent by the traveler to find guardians such as yourself to aid in our fight against the darkness. I don’t believe I got your name though… do you... remember yet who you are?” She began to think on that again, and again drew a blank. All she could think of was a hazy memory involving her clothes when suddenly it came to her.
She stood up and disrobed, confusing her float-y friend as she searched for a piece of patch work authenticating her reason for being there. She found it on the inner sleeve of her shirt, placed there in part because she was not wealthy or important enough to have better quality clothing but more importantly as a way to prevent unwanted ransoms while on the job. At this time she knew neither of those reasons but read what was left of the information anyway.
“… Kaya, my name is, Kaya.” She began to redress again, saying “But I still don’t know who I was, or why I was here.” Her ghost, now looking at her inquisitively, consulted her by saying that it would likely come back at some point. Shifting her position against the wall she remembered she still had Bad juju in hand. The question came of how much ammo it held came back to her, and she lifted it up to inspect it. Sliding the magazine out from the gun she was astonished to find that it was still filled to the brim with bullets.
“It’s… full!” She began pulling out the individual shells from the clip, counting them closely, and was left baffled. Twenty four shells! She was certain that she had fired more bursts than this gun could physically sustain. “How many shots did I fire?”
Sona thought for a brief second before answering “96 bursts with Bad juju, 12 with the shock pistol.”
“… Really.” She said looking at the gun inquisitively “Seems you’ve got more secrets than I do. We should probably get going, something tells me they haven’t forgotten about us” she said to her ghost, to which Sona responded with a simple floating nod.
“We are going to want to look for a ship, might have to take a look in the city.” her ghost said as she stood up.
“That just gives you more time to tell me about the Hive,” she said to her ghost, encouraging her now excited ghost to go into more detail during their trek. And with that they got up and left. Kaya looked back to the ship they had escaped from and thought to herself; I will come back... to learn your secrets.
I had originally wanted to post this with part 2 but due to limited space I had to separate it, I do apologize as this may not have been as interesting as the last part was. Parts 1 and 2 will likely be linked to this sometime tomorrow to make for easier navigation. This will also be posted on another thread in the near future. As always I am open to criticism and hope you enjoy! ^u^
Part 1, in case you missed it or just want to start from the beginning.
http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/91720048/0/0/1
Part 2
http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/91738914/0/0/1
My other story is linked in part 1 so if you are curious about that feel free to check that out.
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2 RepliesWould you mind checking out some of my stories? I hate to ask, but it's the only way I can get noticed. I'll reply with the link if you want.
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Bump.
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4 RepliesMAKE 4!!! BEST STORY EVWR
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1 ReplyGreat story! I love reading these. Keep up the good work I look forward to more.
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1 ReplyAre we getting a part 4?
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1 ReplyAnd I thought I was loony for having a story about all 3 of my characters lol
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2 RepliesWhen are u gonna post chapter 4?
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3 Replies[quote]Outside the door the sun’s light was blinding, a stark contrast to the very active graveyard they had just escaped. Ignoring fatigue and the immediate low visibility they kept running, trying to get as far away from the ship as possible. Just shy of 20 minutes had passed before they found a suitable location to hide and rest. Her ghost said, “Well that was a close one.” The awoken responded with an exhausted roll of her head, looking her ghost in the eye. She slumped to the ground, leaning against the side of the building. After she caught her breath her ghost began talking again. “So… we didn’t get to properly introduce ourselves back there, as I stated I am Sona, your ghost now, I was sent by the traveler to find guardians such as yourself to aid in our fight against the darkness. I don’t believe I got your name though… do you... remember yet who you are?” She began to think on that again, and again drew a blank. All she could think of was a hazy memory involving her clothes when suddenly it came to her. She stood up and disrobed, confusing her float-y friend as she searched for a piece of patch work authenticating her reason for being there. She found it on the inner sleeve of her shirt, placed there in part because she was not wealthy or important enough to have better quality clothing but more importantly as a way to prevent unwanted ransoms while on the job. At this time she knew neither of those reasons but read what was left of the information anyway. “… Kaya, my name is, Kaya.” She began to redress again, saying “But I still don’t know who I was, or why I was here.” Her ghost, now looking at her inquisitively, consulted her by saying that it would likely come back at some point. Shifting her position against the wall she remembered she still had Bad juju in hand. The question came of how much ammo it held came back to her, and she lifted it up to inspect it. Sliding the magazine out from the gun she was astonished to find that it was still filled to the brim with bullets. “It’s… full!” She began pulling out the individual shells from the clip, counting them closely, and was left baffled. Twenty four shells! She was certain that she had fired more bursts than this gun could physically sustain. “How many shots did I fire?” Sona thought for a brief second before answering “96 bursts with Bad juju, 12 with the shock pistol.” “… Really.” She said looking at the gun inquisitively “Seems you’ve got more secrets than I do. We should probably get going, something tells me they haven’t forgotten about us” she said to her ghost, to which Sona responded with a simple floating nod. “We are going to want to look for a ship, might have to take a look in the city.” her ghost said as she stood up. “That just gives you more time to tell me about the Hive,” she said to her ghost, encouraging her now excited ghost to go into more detail during their trek. And with that they got up and left. Kaya looked back to the ship they had escaped from and thought to herself; I will come back... to learn your secrets. I had originally wanted to post this with part 2 but due to limited space I had to separate it, I do apologize as this may not have been as interesting as the last part was. Parts 1 and 2 will likely be linked to this sometime tomorrow to make for easier navigation. This will also be posted on another thread in the near future. As always I am open to criticism and hope you enjoy! ^u^ Part 1, in case you missed it or just want to start from the beginning. http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/91720048/0/0/1 Part 2 http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/91738914/0/0/1 My other story is linked in part 1 so if you are curious about that feel free to check that out.[/quote] You ever thought of making these kind off stories for other players, could give you my character description and you could build off that
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[quote]Outside the door the sun’s light was blinding, a stark contrast to the very active graveyard they had just escaped. Ignoring fatigue and the immediate low visibility they kept running, trying to get as far away from the ship as possible. Just shy of 20 minutes had passed before they found a suitable location to hide and rest. Her ghost said, “Well that was a close one.” The awoken responded with an exhausted roll of her head, looking her ghost in the eye. She slumped to the ground, leaning against the side of the building. After she caught her breath her ghost began talking again. “So… we didn’t get to properly introduce ourselves back there, as I stated I am Sona, your ghost now, I was sent by the traveler to find guardians such as yourself to aid in our fight against the darkness. I don’t believe I got your name though… do you... remember yet who you are?” She began to think on that again, and again drew a blank. All she could think of was a hazy memory involving her clothes when suddenly it came to her. She stood up and disrobed, confusing her float-y friend as she searched for a piece of patch work authenticating her reason for being there. She found it on the inner sleeve of her shirt, placed there in part because she was not wealthy or important enough to have better quality clothing but more importantly as a way to prevent unwanted ransoms while on the job. At this time she knew neither of those reasons but read what was left of the information anyway. “… Kaya, my name is, Kaya.” She began to redress again, saying “But I still don’t know who I was, or why I was here.” Her ghost, now looking at her inquisitively, consulted her by saying that it would likely come back at some point. Shifting her position against the wall she remembered she still had Bad juju in hand. The question came of how much ammo it held came back to her, and she lifted it up to inspect it. Sliding the magazine out from the gun she was astonished to find that it was still filled to the brim with bullets. “It’s… full!” She began pulling out the individual shells from the clip, counting them closely, and was left baffled. Twenty four shells! She was certain that she had fired more bursts than this gun could physically sustain. “How many shots did I fire?” Sona thought for a brief second before answering “96 bursts with Bad juju, 12 with the shock pistol.” “… Really.” She said looking at the gun inquisitively “Seems you’ve got more secrets than I do. We should probably get going, something tells me they haven’t forgotten about us” she said to her ghost, to which Sona responded with a simple floating nod. “We are going to want to look for a ship, might have to take a look in the city.” her ghost said as she stood up. “That just gives you more time to tell me about the Hive,” she said to her ghost, encouraging her now excited ghost to go into more detail during their trek. And with that they got up and left. Kaya looked back to the ship they had escaped from and thought to herself; I will come back... to learn your secrets. I had originally wanted to post this with part 2 but due to limited space I had to separate it, I do apologize as this may not have been as interesting as the last part was. Parts 1 and 2 will likely be linked to this sometime tomorrow to make for easier navigation. This will also be posted on another thread in the near future. As always I am open to criticism and hope you enjoy! ^u^ Part 1, in case you missed it or just want to start from the beginning. http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/91720048/0/0/1 Part 2 http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/91738914/0/0/1 My other story is linked in part 1 so if you are curious about that feel free to check that out.[/quote] You ever thought of making these kind off stories for other players, could give you my character description and you could build off that
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2 RepliesAwesome Let me know when the next one drops Just these few pieces and I can already see your improvement as a writer Keep it up!
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4 RepliesGreat ending! It's an attention grabber. I want some more lol.
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Cool beans.
