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4/28/2008 1:06:47 AM
First of all, this fanfic has not been divided into paragraphs. Second, it was written up in microsoft wordpad. If it takes off, I will put it out in sort-of periodic parts, and put up some other goodies like screenshots of the characters, video clips of some scenes, spin-offs, and trivia. Now without further ado, I will prepare prepare part 1 of my as-of-yet unnamed fanfic: ---Part One--- Sunlight dappled the foliage of the African jungles. Wild animals could be heard screeching, screaming. One could assume from these noises that they had fright resting in them. Any wise enough to come to this conclusion would be proved sorrowfully correct. "Ten kilos, red 16!" Voices rang in the distance as the vicious bladed weaponry of plantlife came into pained view. Gunfire rattled into Cory-134's ears as he slowly came to. he looked up to see a friendly face, or visor to be more precise. Shiva-770 screamed in his cool, silky voice, "Hurry! blow through that roadblock so we can secure this sector for a bomb spree! Hur- Oh, God, Cory!" Shiva's alarmed tone made cory realize his pain. He had several red-hot spines jutting from a breach in his combat armor. He let out a small squeak of pain. "Oh, God.... Oh, God..... stay with me, Cory!!!" Shiva screamed again. He turned and fired off a few rounds from his MA5B Assault Rifle. A large, hairy beast toppled out of the foilage to Cory's right and screamed. Grunted, actually. Two barbed explosives tumbled from it's belt. Cory slowly, painfully, reached over to pick them up. He looked up to watch Shiva fight, like a liquid machine, moving in unpredictable circles, performing his bloody art. Another foe came to replace his fallen comrade. They were brutes. a fitting name for the demonic berserkers that were laid before them. Shiva held his MA5B in one hand while grabbing a combat knife from his CQB chest plate. The knife spun glittering arcs across the leathery skin and fur, exacting embodiment of Shiva's extreme prejudice toward the behemoths. Suddenly, a red dot appeared on Cory's radar. He tried to play dead, expecting the brute to come toward him. The brutes were known to to dismember their prey even after it was dead. In one horrible moment, Cory realized that the brute was coming, not for him, but for Shiva. He swallowed his pain, rolled over, and shoved the barbed grenade into the brutes leg. He allowed his body to tumble down the bank, shielding him from the ensuing detonation. Cory whimpered as his sensory array gave into the war waged in his body. Over his COM channel, Shiva's voice garbled static-laced words. "Goddammit, Cory, why dont you just stab yourself if you're gonna do that type of thing?" Cory tried to laugh but gasped and wheezed in pain. The spines were digging deeper into his skin. He needed a medic, fast. Shiva's soft laughter filled his ears. Cory wanted to scream out his pain but words wouldn't come to his lips. He had to get attention. Only then did he remember his acknowledgement lights. Green, Amber, and Red dotted the left hand side of his visor. He quickly activated his red light twice in a row, signifying a mortal wound. Shiva recoiled for a split second then screamed, "Falk, we need you here, now!!" around the corner came the squad's madic, Falk. "This is bad, Falk, real bad!!" yelled Shiva. "Look, it's not all that bad, just some spiker wounds." Falk replied quietly. "I don't know, look at the spread. It could be mauler or even spike grenade shrapnel." "No, this is spiker. The mauler needles have smaller barbs with 3 prongs on each end, and spike grenade shrapnel contains black casing fragments." Shiva stood quietly, all fear apparently nullified. "....................Oh....." he replied quietly after a few seconds. "Just breathe deep, you're gonna be fine...." Falk whispered as he administered a tranquilizing mist. "You're gonna be fine, Spartan....." ---End of Part One--- Part one serves as a prolouge. The rest will be on the way depending on how well this performs. Please help me think of a title, as.... I suck at that. Thanks for reading, and please post feedback!

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