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Edited by jessomang: 12/11/2014 10:24:39 PM
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Destiny (Fan Made Story)

Hello, I'm a fellow Destiny player who has been sort of inspired to create my own story about Destiny. However I would like to center it around 3 characters with 3 of the classes that are in Destiny. The Titan, the Hunter, and the Warlock. I'm not that good with coming up with story ideas but I'm somehow fired up to get one started with the elements of Destiny. This is what I have so far: 3 Characters The Human Titan, Jastene (no last name) The Exo Hunter, Zurik (no last name) The Awoken Warlock, Remoll (no last name) I would want to implement some of the story modes in Destiny (which there are handful that can also be stretched out into fairly long chapters). Plus, actually have some the NPCs interact with the characters because aside from hearing them speak and when they talk before all the strikes, they are just there for us to look at. I would actually want to tell their own back story as they interact with the characters. I have also come up with a sort of mini prequel-ish on how the characters came to be in the Destiny universe. Here's the Jastene back story: Jastene was born before the "collapse". She grew up in a little town somewhere on Earth. Through her parents and other people she knew as she was growing up, she was told of the miracles that the Traveller had performed and all the magic and wonder there was to discover out in space. Stories about the abilities human can now do and all the tech that was invented right after the Traveller appeared. She vowed to see the the Traveller one day and witness miracles it could perform and also harness her own power. Her parents promise her they would go and see the Traveller once she grew a bit older. As years passed, Jastene, now 86 (she looks like she's in her early 20s) and her parents around the ages 130-136 (the extentsion of human life) was finally able to go to where the Traveller was the day after tomorrow. Jastene could hardly sleep the night before, but ended up doing so...to only be awoken by a loud explosion. Jastene, startled, ran outside to where her parents were. They looked up into the sky and saw a gigantic starship (a Ketch*) along with other smaller ships. They began shooting missiles down below. Explosion after explosion was seen. Her little town, being destroyed. Her father yells for Jastene and her mother to run inside and call for help (space phone thingy) Jastene runs inside her house first, turns expecting to see her mother. Only to witness both her parents being incinerated. As their ashes flew away in the wind, a huge alien creature with horns walks towards Jastene. In pure shock, unable to move she just stands there. The alien readys his rifle towards her. Before it could kill her a flash of light appears and the alien is knocked away. A Guardian in all amor stands before Jastene and offers his hand, and with a heavy voice asks her, "You're okay now, child" (its the Vangaurd Titan, forgot his name). After this incident, Jastene is taken to the Last Safe City on Earth and is then offered a place to become a Guardian. She is offered mentoring both physical and mental. She thinks about it for days, and then finally decides. She then goes to the Tower with other youths. They are taken to the Speaker. The Speaker asks what class do they choose to become. Happy memories flash in her head. She sees her parents smiling, her friends laughing, tears start to flow from her eyes. And with a bold, brave voice, she tells the Speaker: I want to protect. I want to be strong. I want to be a Titan. ... And that is what I have so far!! Please let me know what you think and if you don't mind, provide me with names cause I came up with the names without much thought. They sound a bit silly but I was going for names with a Destiny sound. :p Any ideas you want to throw at me will be greatly appreciated!! Also excuse any typos, I'm a bit sleepy right now. :p Thanks again!! 12/3 *UPDATE* I'm surprised you guys have taken the time to read my story!! Thank you and I really appreciate it!! The VoG part will be posted under this soon. 12/11 *UPDATE* Hello again!! Tis been awhile but I have been working on some parts for this story. I know I said I would post about the Vault of Glass, and I assure you guys I will (for those who are still interested). However, this part is about the Exo Hunter, Zurik and how he came into befriending the Titan Jastene. --- After a couple of years of rigorous training both in handling weapons, armor, and her unlocked abilities, Jastene was finally given the opportunity to explore what was left of Earth after The Collapse. After being adopted into the Tower, she befriended a couple of other people who either lost or were forced out of their towns after that fateful day. With her new companions, they made their way to Tower's hanger. Leading them were 4 Guardians, of which were of high ranking. "Ms. Amanda Holiday!! A pleasure!!", said one of the ranking Guardians. The group turns to the ship they're about to board. It was a fairly huge ship, yellow, with a some blast marks on both sides. It looked as if it had either been through battle or was recently brought back to life. Jastene felt hesitant. Though she really wanted to get out and explore, her instincts were telling her to just turn around and polish Banshee's guns and listen to his ramblings of Guardians thinking his cache was worthless. Better than crashing into the planet. The shipwright turned to the group, rolled up sleeves and a dirty rag in hand. "Holiday. Just Holiday, Azlin. So, is the next batch of runts? Hm... You sure they're Traveler protecting material?" said Holiday, rubbing her hands with the rag and tossing it next to some tools. Azlin turns his head to the group, "Of course they are!! They've been training, and boy they're probably the hardest working group I've seen!! Also, I've been wanting to get out of this place and stretch my legs... You sure this thing can fly?" The Guardian bangs the side of ship with his fist. A loud clash is made along with some dust being disturbed "Hey now, who the hell do you think I am? Of course it'll fly, just don't try flyin' into orbit. Now that I won't bet my Glimmer on." -- *The Last City...* Jastene thought to herself. As the ship flew over the City, one the Guardian leaders stood up. It was a Hunter, Madame Vivian, an Awoken with hot pink hair. "Okay, this is a just a novice patrol mission. I know you runts are itching to getting out there and shoot some stuff but that's not what's going to happen. You all have been issued weapons from Banshee back at the Tower, and I can assure you all they work. They shoot. They can kill. Just don't do anything stupid, listen to us, and you'll be fine. Any questions?" The runts were silent until one person raised their hand. "You. Runt Titan. What?" A Titan in grey toned armor had his hand raised. "Its Will, Madame. Um, are we going to be assigned to groups?" "Of course you are, duh?" Jastene looked at Will and they both nodded their heads. She smiled behind her helmet. She and Will, both humans, were both in the same Titan boot camp. They got along and joked about each other about everything. He too lost his home. His father saved him and brought him to the last City just before Jastene arrived. -- The ship slowly landed. The team was split into four. Jastene was assigned to Patrol group 2, along with Will. "Aw yee!!", Will shouted as he punched Jastene's arm. "Watch it, you jerk!!", Jastene punched back. "HEY!! KNOCK IT OFF.", said their group leader. It was a High Ranking Warlock in black. He was equipped with what seemed like powerful weapons. HR Warlock, Garret. Don't get on his bad side. -- It wasn't after a couple of hours of exploring buildings and caves that group took a break inside a huge complex. It looked like it was mall. "Don't wander too far." said Garret, as he sat on a concrete block. Will and Jastene wandered around the mall. "Man... All this is gone...", Will said. "I know... Never really been to a mall before" said Jastene as she slowly scanned a dark hole in a wall with light from her weapon. "You're kidding!!" "Nope, I grew up in the country... the store down the way was all we had." -- There was a loud crash as Will and Jastene entered a part of the mall that had a bunch of tables and chairs scattered everywhere. A food court. Weapons drawn, they slowly approached the source of the noise. They turned a corner and saw a figure moving in the shadows. They shined their lights on it. The figured turned suddenly and with bright white eyes stared at the two runts. It didn't move. It stood there. Wide eyed, bright white eyes. "What the...", whispered Will,"is it scared?" "Probably", whispered Jastene. The figure slowly started walking towards them. "DON'T MOVE!!", shouted Will. The figure didn't stop. -- To be continued!! (feeling sleepy!!)

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