I'm on my mobile so can't watch this properly now but i hope to do it. You intrigued me because you produce your own music which is a little hobby of my own + you like carbon based lifeforms which are one of the best psybient acts on planet earth, i've seen them live this summer in hungary, funny guys as well ;)

You did a good job, though from a critical stand point there are two main criticisms; Firstly, the thick black border makes it feel as if I am staring at a TV within my TV. This is the majour problem, as it makes the video appear amateurish, even though the content is clearly not. Secondly, the choice of music, though this is only a minour issue and depends on your target audience and intended feel of the video. If the intended emotions was an enticing & mysterious feeling, then you nailed it. But if you were aiming for a video to pump people up before going onto destiny and doing a strike, then you needed music with greater volume and a higher bpm, to get the blood pumping. This is more the type of music video I would watch after playing destiny and I'm preparing to wind down for the night. The music choice will definently restrict the audience size, as far fewer people tend to enjoy soft choral style music, especially in the age of Skrillex. Though personally I enjoyed the music, but I am a poor representative for the social average. Though I must admit your visual and audio choices were clearly well selected, with the imagery fitting the music excellently, so that an integrated harmony between the two was achieved. Which I have seen plenty of music videos that fail to achieve that balance. So pat yourself on the back, cause you succeeded where hundreds of others have failed. So good job man, keep up the good work.

Not very well done