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Edited by WykidJestr: 11/10/2014 9:10:58 PM
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The Destiny Story that should have been...

Update to this thread will be posted as new chapters for this thread so those that wish to follow only have to track one post. For those of you just joining in, the complete write up can be found in the "Destiny Story fanfic The story so far..." #ourfulldestiny Thread. New chapters posted every two days. Readers enjoy. Chapter 4: Keep your enemies close... Last chapter left off with our guardian the ghost and Lakshmi returning to earth only to find hive ships staged for ambush on the dark side of the moon. Ghost: "This is not at all right. We beat the hive before this. Crota and his army were pushed out of the solar system decades before this time. They should not have returned already, much less be this far into the system. The Traveler would have sensed them." Guardian: Placing his hand on the exo's shoulder, "Have they seen us yet?" Scene: A blast against the hull answers the guardians question. Lakshmi: "I'd say so." Guardian: "Fine, we'll fight our way through." Guardian turns to walk out. Lakshmi: "Are you crazy?! There's at least five cruiser sized vessels out there with who knows how many fighters!" Guardian: Looks back over his shoulder, "That's it?" Walks out. Gameplay: Your guardian is now in the turret of the exo's ship. You must destroy a set amount of hive ships before time runs out. (Unlocks three player ship battles in crucible. One pilot and two gunners.) After mission is completed the next cutscene begins. Lakshmi: "That's the last hit we can take. We need to bail." She grabs the guardian out of the turret. Scene: the ship is seen diving to the moons surface. The back of the ship opens as the guardian and exo leap from the back. Seconds later the ship explodes. Camera angle changes to moons surface. Camera zooms to show guardian and exo falling to the surface. The exo pulls her chute cord. It malfunctions. The guardian sees this and fly's her way. The guardian grabs the exo and pulls their own cord. The chute opens and they land. The exo collapses to the ground. She has sustained a wound from the explosion. Guardian: "You going to be okay?" Lakshmi: "I've been through worse," she tries to stand and fails, "still, I can't travel like this. You will need to push out on your own. There's a human encampment about 100 kilometers north of here. The supplies I need to repair myself should be there. Hopefully with any luck we will find a ship too." Guardian: "I'll be back as soon as I can." Lakshmi: "Be careful Guardian. Even your Ghost has no understanding of these creatures and their presence here." Scene: the guardian turns and sees a hive scouting party on the ridge. Guardian: "Then let's go ask them about it." Cocks his weapon and walks that direction. Gameplay: The Guardian is tasked with tracking down the human settlement and killing any hive in their way. Upon defeating the scouting party, the guardian sees a hive jetbike (called a Splinter) bike is very fast. Fires similar blast to hive infantry weapons. Guardian uses jetbike to follow path the ghost provides only to find the partial accelerator from the moon missions under siege from the hive. Fallen and Humans still defend it. The guardian fights its way through waves of hive assault. After the battle sequence, cutscene starts. Scene: the guardian walks up to the gathered defenders Guardian: "Who is in charge here?" ???: a deep glutteral voice belows from behind the guardian, "That would be me..." Scene: a large shadow looms over the guardian as they turn around. The camera changes to over the guardians shoulder to reveal a fallen Archon standing over him. Archon: "And who is it that wishes to address me?" Guardian: Not looking to explain the story again, "I am an Enforcer, I was forced to evacuate from Mars from an alien invasion force." Archon: pauses and observes the guardian, he begins to walk around hi surveying him, "Interesting, you Look like an Enforcer, but..." Sniffs at him, "Where is your Eye?" The archon leans in close to the guardians face revealing a translator latched to his facemask. Ghost: apparates between the two "I presume you mean me?" Archon: slightly annoyed, "hmmph, very well then "Enforcer" What can the humble House of Drakes offer the Traveler this day?" Sarcasm drips in his words as he motions for the guardian to follow him as he walks inside. Guardian: "A friend of mine, an exo, is wounded further to the south, she needs repairing and quickly." Scene: As they pass around the corner the Archon whips around, snatches the guardian by the throat and pins them to the wall. Archon: "And so the lie is revealed. No Enforcer speaks of no one as "friends". You weave a web of lies little one, and it is liable to get your throat slit." The Archon brings a blade to the guardians throat. Guardian: "ahem" nodds downward, to show the Archon that the ghost is hovering with all the pins to his grenades. Ghost: "Please give me a reason to let them go off." Archon: "hmmph... Perhaps you are useful just the same," slowly lowers the guardian to the floor. Now musing, "You are no Enforcer but you may still be of use to me..." Guardian: "what about my frie..." Stops. Resets, "what about the exo?" Archon: "I will ensure your " friend" is cared for, but you must do something for me.' Scene: the ghost and guardian exchange glances and them turn back to the Archon. Ghost: "What exactly would that be?" Scene: the Archon turns to lookout over the moonscape. He gestures to a peak in the distance. Archon: "Over that crest is a cave we once used as a shelter for our men. After the invasion started we had to abandon it and fortify the accelerator. I have sent patrols but none of them have returned." Looks back at the guardian, narrowing his eyes, "there is a weapon located deep inside the cave which I wish returned to me. Return with it and you can consider us even." The Archon walks off inside the building. Ghost: camera shifts in front of the guardian and ghost, "Next time, why don't you let me do the talking.." Gameplay: guardian is given access to a Fallen Pike. Player uses the pike to cross the map to the cave mentioned engaging random hive that are patrolling along the way. The guardian arrives at the cave site. Scene: the guardian approaches the cave when the ground starts to shake violently. Ghost: "This can't be good!" Scene the guardian and ghost fall back quickly as an immense tower bursts out of the ground and spirals upward. Gameplay: This mission is launched as a broadcasted public event. This means all players while on their mission selection map will get notification of the event on their screen. Up to twelve players may join. All players must fight their way through multiple waves through the tower to retrieve the Fallen super weapon.
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