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2/23/2005 10:31:56 PM
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The Light. (A story I began last night.)
Upon realising how rubbish this story is and how truly pathetic I am at writting, this story has been removed. Please do not post in this thread as it will be waste of your time. I apoligise for wasting valuable server resources.
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[Edited on 2/23/2005 3:27:29 PM]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] un gato [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] GruntHaven Yeah tried to fix some more spelling mistakes and reposted it. Un gato I'll re-work Fraya tonight and try to go into some depth with Jacob. You guys severly shot me down didn't you. I didn't think it was so bad for a first attempt at writting in more then 18 months but obvoiusly I was wrong. Maybe I will just start from scratch again tonight and do four or five drafts before I post anything for you guys again. How about I redo it from sctrach un gato, with a much darker more realistic world.[/quote] Note that I said that that part was just my opinion. Someone else could have seen it far different. I simply didn't like the style, but then again I didn't really like the style in The Lord of the Rings (which makes me weird). And you can ignore weird people.[/quote] Well then our thoughts on story the style of the Lord of the Rings are the same.
