Upon realising how rubbish this story is and how truly pathetic I am at writting, this story has been removed. Please do not post in this thread as it will be waste of your time. I apoligise for wasting valuable server resources.
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[Edited on 2/23/2005 3:27:29 PM]
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[quote]“Ow. That hurt” Fraya cried out as she landed heavily in the dirt, her blade crashed to the ground next to her. “I told you to concentrate on your balence,” [/quote] Fixx0rzed: “Ow! That hurt,” Fraya cried out as she landed heavily in the dirt; her blade crashed to the ground next to her. “I told you to concentrate on your balance,”