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12/13/2006 1:18:09 AM
as many of you know i have grammer issues and i'm really stubern but today is a new day meet alpha soilder the newest fan fic. chapter 1 The Awakening Tom sat on his cot looked at a teenage girl in the cot across from him she had been hit by a human sniper rifle he remembered that day earlier he was a private actually he was demoted to buck-private. He was sitting on his seat in the pelican when the girl next him cried out in pain three more shots. Came from a human sniper rifle when a brute jumped into the pelican he held the sniper and graped her by her throat and said you humans are worthless and through her. To the ground tom jumped from his seat and shot with his battle rifle his battle rifle had. Three differnt gun settings single fire burst shot and mulity fire he shot with the burst and the brute howled then he ran forward and pulled. Tom up the brute said how dare you hurt me human the rest of the platoon were startled. Tom graped a plasma grenade on the brutes belt and said at least I'm not a big dumb ape then they brute saw only blue from the plsama stuck to his face. Tom kicked the brute over he landed on a banshee now he was here at the medic camp they were headed for New Mombassa but had to pass through. The city Rush Hour named for it's constant traffic but now this large city was a huge battlefield. what do you think so far i will correct it later sorry it's so short. [Edited on 12/15/2006]

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