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5/15/2012 9:12:56 PM
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Too soon DeeJ, too soon

You kinda locked the thread a bit early :( I'm sure alot of us were about to submit ours. "We are wide open to attack!" shouted the team leader. "All available units, prepare to ________________________..." and before our senior officer could finish his sentence I watched as a bullet pierced his chest, collapsing him to the floor. The yells of my comrades and the whizzing of bullets echoed throughout the storm encased forest, it was an ambush. The raining bullets were equal to the amount of droplets falling from the heavens above. As silence over took the forest once again, the steam from my barrel and my steadfast finger on the trigger once again awaited the next attack from the enemy who waits on the other side of the dense fog, only the gods can save us now. [Edited on 05.15.2012 1:23 PM PDT]

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  • There was already enough entries. Any more and it would take him twice as long to get through them. [Edited on 05.15.2012 1:15 PM PDT]

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    [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mythical Wolf There was already enough entries. Any more and it would take him twice as long to get through them.[/quote] Mine was a winner and I'm usually not confident about anything. Eh, I'll get'em next time

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  • There's always next time. You mind posting your story anyways? I actually enjoyed reading them.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mythical Wolf There was already enough entries. Any more and it would take him twice as long to get through them.[/quote] There were a lot longer than 4 sentences also.

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    [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Synyster Ricz There's always next time. You mind posting your story anyways? I actually enjoyed reading them.[/quote] Sure, thank god I remembered it, it was rather poetic

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] spartain ken 15 [/quote] Yeah I know. :/

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  • It took you that long to construct 4 sentences?

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    [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] CrazzySnipe55 It took you that long to construct 4 sentences?[/quote] It had to be good. And I posted mine on the op, to bad it didn't go through

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] CrazzySnipe55 It took you that long to construct 4 sentences?[/quote]I think it took a bit longer trying to create an original post that made sense. At least, I hope that's why it took so long :-)

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] CrazzySnipe55 It took you that long to construct 4 sentences?[/quote] Four sentences is like, uber hard, dude. I doubt this reply will be four sentences long. Man, screw sentences. I enjoyed the story a lot for four sentences. A bit of a shame it's not submitted, but even still, great job. EDIT: It's technically five but who's counting? [Edited on 05.15.2012 1:31 PM PDT]

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  • Sorry, [url=http://i48.tinypic.com/r0vxg4.png]I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.[/url]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] x Foman123 x Sorry, [url=http://i48.tinypic.com/r0vxg4.png]I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.[/url][/quote] 1/10

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] x Foman123 x [/quote] That's a Photoshop edited image. I can tell by the different pixels.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] spartain ken 15 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] x Foman123 x Sorry, [url=http://i48.tinypic.com/r0vxg4.png]I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.[/url][/quote] 1/10[/quote] 6/10

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] defnop552 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] CrazzySnipe55 It took you that long to construct 4 sentences?[/quote]I think it took a bit longer trying to create an original post that made sense. At least, I hope that's why it took so long :-)[/quote]I constructed mine in the span of about 15 minutes while being distracted by television. Just sayin'.

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    [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] x Foman123 x Sorry, [url=http://i48.tinypic.com/r0vxg4.png]I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.[/url][/quote] Seems legit

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    So is it good?

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  • It took me 30 secs tops, it's for fun, it's not like your lives depended on your submission.

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  • Now you can copy-paste for the next contest. Because I'm sure it's generic enough ;)

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    [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] x Foman123 x Sorry, [url=http://i48.tinypic.com/r0vxg4.png]I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.[/url][/quote] Haha this is actually pretty Funny if you ask me

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] x Foman123 x Sorry, [url=http://i48.tinypic.com/r0vxg4.png]I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.[/url][/quote] So realistic! You should enter the Photoshop contests, too!

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  • I don't understand this thread, but I haven't posted in a while so... here is my post. Take it or leave it.

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  • Foamy likes himself too much I think. I should come up with a way to knock him down a few levels. Perhaps implying that him mom is obsessed with carnality will do the trick. Its at least never been tried before. OT: Obligatory pseudo on topic comment so that its not quite so easy to accuse me of not only placating and tolerating a derailment, but also actively participating in one. I am a genius. No one will ever see through this tactic.

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    [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] evilcam Foamy likes himself too much I think. I should come up with a way to knock him down a few levels. Perhaps implying that him mom is obsessed with carnality will do the trick. Its at least never been tried before. OT: Obligatory pseudo on topic comment so that its not quite so easy to accuse me of not only placating and tolerating a derailment, but also actively participating in one. I am a genius. No one will ever see through this tactic. [/quote] It's so effective that you just confused me

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  • What's mid-afternoon in English terms? Evening?

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Spartan 891 [/quote] 3pm or whenever DeeJ is free.

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