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9/11/2005 1:18:04 AM
[i]I'm going to try and put all my story's on this thread, so the first post will be the preview and the table of contexts. ;;)[/i] [quote][movie trailer mans voice] Sitting on his newly acquired thrown, gazing at the land once so beautiful with life, now draped with death. The virus he once loathed, he now embraces, for Uncontested Victory. The Chronicles have just begun. The Gnome Chronicles: Book Ŧwo. Coming to a thread near you. [/movie trailer mans voice][/quote] [*]Chapter One: Uncontested Victory - Page 1 - Post 2 [*]Chapter Two: Everything Old is New Again - Page 1 - Post 8 [*]Chapter Three: The -blam!- is Back - Page 1 - Post 12 [*]Chapter Four: You called down the Thunder... - Page 1 - Post 15 [*]Next week: [i]Seven Deadly Sins[/i] [Edited on 10/8/2005]

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    10/8/2005 7:29:45 PM Permalink
    [i]Chapter Four: You called down the thunder. . .[/i] MinkOWar fought as he was being pulled down the hallway, after turning a corner the man whispered into Mink’s ear, “Don’t fight, they have really good hearing.” Mink stop struggling, he knew that voice, The man let him go and he turned to face Frankie. “Come with me.” Frankie ran off down the hall and Mink followed. He followed Frankie for fifteen forum blocks before getting to a thread labeled “.the7thwar”, he entered to a destroyed thread. Frankie walked over to a table and tapped it nine times, the thread’s code changed and with a blink of an eye they were in the middle of a huge room, packed with survivors. “Welcome to the resistance.” “In this place we have over two hundred survivors and were finding more everyday, were not going to give up to Gnome.” Frankie Told Mink. Mink gasped at the sight, “There is another group like this, a hideout made by The Soul. Halifax, VII Toast and dmbfan are still out there with the gnomes, you have to help me find them.” Mink told Frankie, then he explained everything he knew and Frankie hurried to assemble a group to help Mink find the others, and another group to get in contact with the Souls group. - - - - - - - - - Anton studied Impurity’s body as GameJunkieJim stood guard, Impurity had a fracture on the back of his skull that, Anton assumed, was the cause of death. All of a sudden Anton jumped up and tore out his ban-hammer, “What’s wrong?” Jim asked. “His ban-hammer is gone.” Anton answered jim, “Grab his body and pull him in, quick!” He ordered. Just as he finished a low rumble echoed down the hall. Anton didn’t have to wait, he knew it was a pack of gnomes headed their way. “Grab the body and warn the others, I’ll try and hold them back” Anton ordered Jim, who did so with out hesitation. Anton raised his ban-hammer and waited for the onslaught. The rumble grew louder and louder and finally something came running at full speed around the corner, a human. The man, dressed in black, had a cape that flew behind him as he ran, a blood red hue surrounded him, dark hair and eyes that would kill on sight. “Gnome.” Anton whispered in horror. - - - - - - - - - The past few hours Halifax, dmbfan, Twitch, Toast, Obbi, and Joey, had been jumping from thread to thread hiding from the huge number of gnomes that had dramatically increased in their area. After running into a thread, they noticed a body on the floor, it was still moving. The group helped the man up who was battered, beaten and laying in his own blood. “What’s your name?” Halifax asked the man. “A-A-Aarlos.” he coughed out with a dry and scratchy voice. As they checked to make sure Aarlos was fine, Halifax had heard talking outside the thread. Jumping to the door, he pressed his ear up to the wall and listened in, “gnomes” he whispered. There were three loud bangs then the screaming of gnomes filled the hallway. Curious Halifax started to open the door, it was kicked down from the outside, throwing him halfway across the room. In the dusty light of the door way, MinkOWar stood tall, with Ghandi 2 and Psyched behind him. “Come quick!” Mink yelled, as Ghandi and Psyched ran back out in the hallway to fight off a few gnomes. The Group ran behind the three rescuers as they swatted gnomes out of the way like flies. Halfway down the fourth corridor Halifax and Twitch had to help Aarlos run, he was in too much pain to do it alone. They ran for what seemed like miles, any gnome that stood in their way was whacked with a ban-hammer with force that would send it flying across the hall, and hitting a wall before it was deleted. The reached the destroyed thread and doubled checked to see if anyone was watching as they entered. MinkOWar tapped the table inside the thread nine times and the thread transformed, Aarlos stood in amazement. - - - - - - - - - - - Anton raised his ban-hammer and braced himself, he had to buy time for the others inside the hideout. Gnome raced towered him and raised the war-torn master ban-hammer that once belong to the late Achronos. The two swung at the same time, both banhammers collided with each other, They struggled for a few second before Gnome overpowered Anton and pushed him back. Hitting the ground on his back, Anton rolled to doge Gnome’s attack, he jumped to his feet and was able to see the gigantic hoard of gnomes charging down upon him. Gnome swung his Ban-hammer with all his strength, Anton dodged and Gnome’s ban-hammer got stuck in the wall code. Anton wiped his ban-hammer and whacked Gnome in the back, it barely scathed him, because Gnome was more powerful than Achronos, who was almost immune, he too was immune from deletion. As Gnome struggled with his ban-hammer, Anton saw his chance and hopped into the hideout and watched as the code speed up right in front of the gnomes. Locking the door down as tight as he could, he ran down the dark hallway screaming for help. Great Pretender and GameJunkieJim were the first to reach him, Anton told them to try and hold the door shut as long as they could. Anton ran into the main room, he looked around as saw the Soul working on a piece of wall. “What are you doing?” Anton yelled to him over the crowd. “I’ve created a back exit to a thread in The Flood.” The Soul Answered, “All the survivors are to escape through that exit then I’ll stay back and delete it so Gnome can’t follow.” “Then you’ll be stuck here with Gnome.” “Don’t worry about me, All who are deleted come back to me...” The Soul replied with confidence. Anton stayed back with The Soul and made sure everyone got threw, just as he was about to go get Pretender and Jim, they came running in screaming that they couldn’t hold the door anymore. The three ran through the exit, Anton took one last look back at the soul as the door was deleted. To Be continued.... -Gnome-
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    9/25/2005 6:46:45 PM Permalink
    [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] FusedDanksta Talk about building the suspense......How am I supposed to wait until nest Saturday? --Fused--[/quote] ::) mua ha ha!
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    9/24/2005 11:04:31 PM Permalink
    Talk about building the suspense......How am I supposed to wait until nest Saturday? --Fused-- [Edited on 9/24/2005]
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    9/24/2005 10:25:51 PM Permalink
    Chapter Three: The -blam!- is Back The past week, Gnome sat upon his thrown, seeking out his once mighty gnome army and rebuilding it. The beginning of the week Gnome had unleashed a wave of poisonous code that crippled the site and, he thought, deleted all non-Gnome-aligned users. While positioning units Gnome had noticed a few of his gnome missing, small gnome search groups had discover their dead bodies. This was his first proof that at least one person survived his attacks. He increased his grasp on the site and imported a lot more gnomes to search out and destroy these people. His searches discover one user, who was willing to trade his life for information. After only a few hours of torture, he told Gnome all he knew. This user had told Gnome about survivors and resistance groups, most of which didn’t know much of what had happened in the past week. After a few hours of torture, the user had agreed to work for Gnome and help bring these groups down. - - - - - - - - - - Halifax had led his old friends, Obbi, Twitch, and Joeybagofdonuts, down the back alleyways with a hoard of angry gnome at their heels. Leading them back to the others, Halifax screamed out for help and VII Toast and dmbfan ran out of a thread behind the gnomes with ban hammer raised. As gnome flew through the air after being smashed with the ban hammers, Twitch swung around and kicked a gnome on the side of its head, knocking it out cold. Obbi took out three daggers from his belt, with out looking he tossed two over his shoulder and Joeybagofdonuts and Halifax caught them, then faced the gnomes. Surrounded it didn’t take long for the six of them to kill the whole horde, after examining the bodies for survivors, Halifax told VII toast and dmbfan about twitch, obbi, and Joey. After that he noticed that MinkOWar was missing. “He went to search for you, that was ten minuets ago.” dmbfan told them with a hint of worry in his voice. - - - - - - - - - - - Impurity had looked for anyone watching as he left the makeshift hideout. He ran down the hall jumping from thread to thread in his daily search for more survivors. While searching a small thread, there was a loud rumble coming down the corridor in his direction, Impurity put his back to the door and listened as the rumbling got closer. The rumbling came and passed the small thread, hearing the voices Impurity had no doubt it was a group of gnomes. Returning to check the bodies in the thread, the door swung open and Impy withdrew his ban hammer and turned to face the door. A strange looking man stood at the door, dirty and coved in bruises and cuts he was surprised to see anyone. Seeing the ban hammer the man fell to his knees and begged for his life. Impurity sheathed his ban hammer and helped the man up. “Who are you?” Impy asked. “They call me Aarlos. I was just...I don’t even remember what I was doing when these, these gnome things attacked me, I managed to escape and hide from them.” After checking Aarlos out, he led him back down the corridors to the dead end. Checking to see if anyone else was around he pressed his palm against the code. - - - - - - - - - - - - - Sneaking down the hallway, MinkOWar noticed that there was a increase in gnome activity in his area. He stopped in the shadows of the hallways to listen in on a gnome conversation, “Why is he so angry all the time?” “Who knows. Probably because he was tortured by Overlord of Terror for hours and now he has to obey the masters orders.” “I can’t believe the Overlord of Terror put that pile of human meat in charge of us, where is he anyways?” “He’s around here somewhere.” As he was listened in, a Man hidden in the shadows grabbed Mink from behind, put his palm over Mink’s mouth and pulled him deeper into the shadows. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A loud crack, then a short scream of death echoed throughout the forums. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Anton P Nym heard the scream from the souls hideout, he grabbed GamejunkieJim and whipped out his ban hammer, together they ran for the exit. Anton opened the code, and right in front of the door, dead on the ground, was Impurity. To be Continued. . . -Gnome- [Edited on 9/24/2005]
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    9/21/2005 8:03:55 PM Permalink
    Chapter Three Promo: A Traitor dances with the devil, and a deal was made. Gnome tightens his grip on his newly conquered land, and a death that will spell the beginning of the end. [I] “Who are you?” “They call me Aarlos.” [/i] [b]Chapter Three: The -blam!- is Back[/b] Coming Saturday, the 24th.
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    9/17/2005 8:06:18 PM Permalink
    If you couldn't guess I'm going to try and post a chapter every saturday (It's so hard not to post them early!). This week was a short one, but nether the less post your questions, comments, concerns. If you like Reading or Writing Fan(or forum)-fics your always welcome to join "The Official Fan-Fic Group." [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Halifax *sigh* I wish I could kill gnomes in real life.[/quote] He, he practice make perfect.
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    9/17/2005 7:46:24 PM Permalink
    Chapter Two: Everything old is new again Halifax had put a small search group together, VII Toast, MinkOWar, dmbfan, and pistolsnipe. Halifax led them out of the hideout and down the hall, he stood there for a minuet trying to recognize anything, Finally he remembered a thread and he knew where he was. He led the group deeper into the void, with a ten minuet hike before stopping at a thread entitled, “Spammers!” He opened the door to the thread and entered the empty dark room, the only light came from a glowing white door at the far end of the room, “A link to the flood” Halifax explained to them. The group of four silently followed Halifax down an dark cramped hallway, for what seemed like hours until finally Halifax walked right into the exit, “Here it is.” he said while rubbing his nose. The door opened up into a destroyed thread, the floor and walls were splashed with spam. Hurrying through the room, the group entered an empty hallway. They followed the hall until they reached a corner, that’s where Halifax noticed noise coming from a near by thread. VII Toast and dmbfan took out their banhammers and were ready to strike as MinkOWar opened the door. A lone gnome flew out of the thread and jumped on pistolsnipe’s neck, screaming pistolsnipe ran around like a maniac trying to get the gnome off. Pistolsnipe fell to the ground, and stopped moving, that’s when Halifax was able to kick the gnome off of pistol. VII Toast went to check if Pistol was ok as Halifax chased after the gnome. He chased the gnome for Thirteen Forum blocks until a blond haired figure jumped out of a thread and tacked the gnome. The blond haired man struggled with the gnome until he was able to pin it down, unleashing wave upon wave of fists at the gnome’s face. Burring the gnome’s eye with a lite cigarette, he screamed “Take that you tiny little bastard!” Halifax knew that voice. The man then picked up the dead gnome and punted it down the hallway. “Twitch!” Halifax yelled hopefully. Twitch turned around to see Halifax for the first time, “Halifax! You sexy beast!” he then ran and hugged Halifax and screamed “Your alive!”, then Twitch slapped him, “Yeah, your alive!” Halifax quickly tried to explain what was he knew about the situation so far, then Twitch explained on how he and another found a secret crack in the Holding-Cell for banned users and escaped. Before Twitch could finish, Halifax noticed a small group of gnomes surrounding the dead gnome. Trying to drag Twitch back to the others, Twitch overpowered Halifax and pulled him into the thread he jumped out from. Inside the horribly dark room, Halifax saw a user scanning the source code map for the forums, “I’ve managed to find three likable stops where Gnome could be.” the man looked up and Halifax saw his face, “Obbi?!” he said. “I can’t leave you people alone for one second can I?” Obbi told him, “I leave for a few months for Intelligence training and this happens. If I had been there I’d be getting it on with Gnome’s dead corps right now.” Halifax gave a little chuckle. The back door to the Thread burst open and JoeyBagofDonuts came running in, “Uh, Guys there is a very large horde of angry gnome’s right outside that door, I say we get the hell out of here, now.” Before they could reach the back door, the front door busted down and an onslaught of angry gnomes rushed in. To be continued. . . -Gnome- [Edited on 9/17/2005]
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    9/15/2005 3:32:15 PM Permalink
    Gnome Chronicles Book Two. Something that people should really read. This is good, sorry it took time to reply, I havent visited CF for awhile. As Halifax said, there is grammatical errors, but that doesnt bother me any. This is some "[i]good[/i]" stuff. PM when next part is out, so I can read it. -HaloXenon-
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    9/14/2005 9:55:09 PM Permalink
    That's right. I'm bleeding to death and I can still act tough. As for the story, there are several grammatical errors, but that's okay. It's a good story. (I know this is old, but I just learned of this thread like 5 minutes ago and I wanted to pay my respects to Gnome.)
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    9/11/2005 1:34:09 AM Permalink
    hey its that guy who asked how to clear his internet history, so he wouldnt get cought looking at pr0n.
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    9/11/2005 1:19:46 AM Permalink
    The Gnome Chronicles-Book Two Chapter One: Uncontested Victory? A long, code ago, In a server far, far away. Halifax awoke with a pounding headache, his first attempt to move sent a wave of pain through his body. He tried again, this time the pain had dulled a little, standing up he fell to his knees in agony. He looked around and saw nothing but bodies, all of which, he thought, were dead. Looking down, he noticed he was kneeling in a puddle of his own blood, he quickly checked himself. Halifax had a deep gash on his left arm, cuts covered his head, face, and chest. Struggling, he got up and checked the bodies around him for survivors. Finding none, he searched the room for an exit. Halifax crawled out of the room, he looked up and down the hallway, it all seemed strangely familiar to him. Walking down the hall he noticed that parts the code had a hint of red to it, his memory slowly flooded back into his head. The 7th army, Goweb’s death, The Soul....Gnome, it all came back to him. With the eerily silence that filled the hall, along side the uncountable number of dead bodies, Halifax knew The Triple alliance had fallen in the face of pure evil. Out of the corner of his eye, Halifax saw something move down the hall from him. He quickly spun around to see nothing, curiously he continued down that way. He took five steps before something bolted out from one thread across the hallway and into another. Surprised he almost fell backwards, but caught himself. Quickly and as quietly as he could, Halifax ran to the thread and put his ear to the door. He could hear something quickly moving around, he put his hand on the handle and threw the door open. The small thread had four bodies laying in corner, a fifth was being checked out by a man. “Who are you!” Halifax screamed out in his scratchy voice. The man became still for a second then turned with a look of shock on his face, the man was Great Pretender. The Great Pretender looked different then the last time Halifax remembers seeing him. “Halifax?” TGP asked in astonishment. “Pretender? You look different, what happened here?” “Not here, Halifax, follow me” TGP led Halifax back out of the thread. Quickly looking if the hallway was clear, Pretender ran down the hallway with Halifax not far behind. He led Halifax deep in the void of The Underground before stopping at a dead end. Great Pretender scanned the hallway and pressed his palm against the wall, the code stopped and disappeared unveiling a secret entrance. Pretender ran into the darkness and Halifax slowly followed, he looked back in time to see the code reappear and speed up. Halifax slowly made his way in the completely dark hallway, it felt like the floor sloped downward. It wasn’t long before he lost the sound of Great Pretenders feet against the floor. He continued down the dark hallway until he saw a glimpse of light. Halifax hurried in that direction as he ran, his pain grew. He entered a room filled with injured people laying on the ground, he looked around and saw only a few member who were up and helping the others, six exactly. Before Halifax could take another step, he passed out and fell to the ground. Halifax awoke several hours later in a daze. He looked around the poorly built room, ‘Made in a hurry maybe?’ he thought, he counted the people in the room, there were 32 injured and only six who were fit, they were: dmbfan, Anton P Nym, Great Pretender, Impurity, VII Toast, and GameJunkieJim. Halifax remembered them all, but somehow they looked different. Halifax tried to get up, Impurity walked over and stopped him, he put a blanket over Halifax and gave him a pill and a cup of water. “Its for the pain.” He told Halifax, who took the pill and laid back down. “What’s happened around here?” he asked hoping he’d finally get an answer. “Well, what’s the last thing you remember?” Impurity asked “Jumping on Gnome’s back, pulling him to the ground in a dog pile.” “Hmm..” Impurity got comfortable, “Not much is known about how the Great Battle played out, Gnome had power the likes of which you couldn’t imagine, in the end he had killed The Overlord, took his thrown and poisoned the very code on which this site was made of. That was over a week ago, The survivors had settled here, and we have been searching for more survivors ever since. With every moderator killed, us six were promoted.” “If Achronos was killed along with the Mods, who had the power to promote you?” “The Soul had survived. He was the first to find us and brought us here, to his makeshift hideout. The problem is, from here were cut off from the rest of the forums. The majority of Gnome’s army is stationed right above us, we have our backs in a corner. The Soul has been the only one to travel elsewhere.” Impurity replied. The pills kicked in and Halifax was able to stand up with ease. “How far in The Underground void are we?” he asked “Just before the Halo CE days, why?” Halifax stood there thinking for a moment, “I know a back passage way into The Flood from here.” To be Continued. . . -Gnome- [Edited on 9/14/2005]
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