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2/17/2005 9:56:20 AM
Me and a buddy are currently in the process of getting ideas together for a character in order to write a screenplay. Tell me if you think its a good idea. [B] Captain ASBO [/b] (ASBO is an acronym. It means Anti Social Behavioral (SP?) Order. It is placed upon young teens who constantly cause problems for a local community.) Captain ASBO (Cap) is a crimefighter, similar to The Punisher or Batman. A vigilante on the edge of the law, he uses EXTREME violence to reach his goals. He is heavily stocked up with vast amounts of military grade weaponry, and has an enhanced and modified Advanced Fighter Jet. He uses all of this equipment, all of his training, and A LOT of violence to fight one thing in particular....... Petty Crime. Shoplifting, Loitering, Vandalism, Petty Theft, etc. With the help Hummer (Imagine Whistler from Blade, but much older and more fragile) who upgrades Cap's weaponry etc, Cap fights petty crime with extreme violence. He shoots first, and doesn't ask questions. He has a neural net lace, implanted when he was younger in order to fight petty crime. To recharge this, he must go through an extremely painful recharging process, which lasts 6 hours. He really hates petty crime, and throught the film he fights inner demons, which he must overcome in order to stop a petty crime wave sweeping the city. This is a comedy, and is a parody of super hero comic books and films in general, and its main inspirations are 'The Punisher' and 'Batman'. Tell me what you think , and if you are particuarly interested send me your email address, and I will send you a small portion of the script I have got togehter so far, as well as further descriptions. (Please forgive the spelling mistakes, I am tired and hungover)

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