You're lacking substance. What are his goals? His dreams? What does his family think of his .21 kd spread? These are some questions that need answers.
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He is a poor caukasian man, he only wished and prayed he got an exotic, his family disregarded him, saying "The Traveler won't help you! All you are is crap!" He prayed every night, every day, for an exotic, no matter how sucky. So he played crucible, and he got a .21 KD. He said "I'm never gonna get an exotic like this!" And bam! Hard Light. He pooped himself.
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You win.
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Indeed.