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Edited by Masque of Night:
9/26/2014 1:43:46 AM
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It's not bad, but i'm not very fond about how disproportionate the lines are from one another at times. It just throws the piece off in my opinion, but that's just a matter of personal preference.
My apologies if I sound like a critic, but i'm only as honest as i'd like people to be with me about my own work.
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It's fine. This is very different from the original draft however
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Well, hey, as long as you're happy with it, that's what counts. Writing can be many things, a small time hobby, a big time career, or a method for someone to express thoughts or feelings in a different kind of way, but the important thing is being satisfied with your own work. If you like it, stick by it. Many things can make a piece valuable, but the most important value that I find is the personal satisfaction that one receives from creating something they can call their own and be proud of.
