The lighting is very strong. You're talented, how old are you might I ask? Dat tiny hand though ;) id work on your proportions, depth value and contour lines. That vex for example is just popping off the page, when they should be sitting around the same level as that tree. Painting and blurring your eyes will help you see where forms are sitting in space. Anatomy will come with continual practice [i]i asked how old you are because I'll tell you know, admissions officers from schools that will train you formally [b]would[/b] certainly be interested in you, especially if you're around the highschool age. [/i] Don't let this go to your head, but your as talk ended as [b]some[/b] of the sophomores I know (then of course some of the people that come here might as well already have entertainment art jobs)