I'm not going to lie, I don't like your voice for this. It does not sound very futurey or make for a good narrative voice. However, I [b]DO[/b] like the idea of these videos, and suggest you keep it up. The above was merely my own personal feedback feedback. My suggestion if anything is (if you know anyone willing to help) to either try to get a friend with a better "Narrating" voice, or use video editing software to make it sound more narratory. Sorry if I caused offense, I just like to try and help people with their work. Edit: Also, this may just be my comp but it's very quiet. Maybe up the speaking volume or add subtitles?