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Edited by Wreckage: 2/18/2019 4:40:07 PM
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ASotF update

As the response has been decent, especially with the few people who reside in this subforum, I will be posting the first chapter in a week or more, depending on the status of whether I should post it or wait until I have more chapters completed. Here is a little teaser, just for the time being. [spoiler]The teaser showed here may not be in the final version, keep that in mind.[/spoiler] [i]Enjoy.[/i] [b]Prologue[/b] It’s warm outside. The sun is shining through the windows, broken and encrusted with centuries of dirt and vegetation, along with the house that became my “base”, if you could even call it that. Three packages of instant ramen, and half a liter of water are left in my travel pack. “Well,” I whisper out loud. “Only a couple more days and you might have to revive me Ghost.” Ghost is a very impatient and nervous little light, but he tends to keep himself busy with scanning things around the environment. Little did he know, we were in the place I grew up after he revived me, brought me back. Never really named him. He just.. is there, not interactive most of the time. Like a light with little purpose. “Look at this photo. It looks ingrained and dirty. Seems like a piece was torn off of it,” he responds, ignoring my comment. “This place, seems like an old memory that’s misplaced,” he pauses. “Do you remember what your life was like?” I stare out through the broken window, into the green shroud of trees that cover up the sunlight, shadows dancing on the concrete and gravel, while I zone out. “Oh, sorry…” [i]Please leave any advice below, as this isn’t just the first chapter, and it is still a work in progress. Thank you for reading![/i]

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  • Looks good. I hadn’t gotten around to asking yet, since you hadn’t posted an actual chapter yet, but may I add this and your Character Bios to my [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/245771343/0/0]Archive[/url]? I’ll also add your future chapters once they’re posted. [spoiler]If you allow me to add these, what should I call this specific post in the Archive? I think Teaser will work well, since this isn’t actually a prologue/chapter and functions as a teaser[/spoiler]

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