I think the story is going great.
I'd like to see a little more casual dialogue between the two fireteams. Just random silly comments and chats. So far I feel like most of Fireteam Rescues' talking is done by Jaymen when she's bossing Slingshot around. I'd like to see Rescue's members talk to each other more, so we can see their team dynamic and how they treat each other
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I plan on making various side stories between main chapters and the Forsaken DLC. Thanks for the input!