I enjoyed what you were trying to do, rather a lot actually. It didn't completely work for me, but I about ruined a monitor by liberally spewing coffee at your first shotgun death. I would have liked to see something where you had pre-recorded gameplay, and staged more like a violent episode of SS; not only do I think it would have come across more composed and allowed you a chance to review and fix a few impression slips (I think I counted 2, for a grand total of about .75 seconds), but I think it might have allowed you a better canvas to showcase what you were trying to do. I think it was a great effort, very well done overall. My assumption is you got the idea in your head, and said -blam!- it, I'm doing that right now. Nothing wrong with that, but it can come out a tad unformatted that way once in a while (says the non-YouTuber person, lol). Generally speaking, I like what you try to do in your content stream; you express yourself clearly and concisely without boring either yourself or your viewers. If I had one piece of advice to you, it would be to keep doing this kind of thing, but take an extra 30 minutes between concept and execution to round out the few rough edges you might find and make a couple of editorial decisions. All in all, you're one of the greats in the YouTube Destiny arena, and I respect both your efforts and your fortitude to just be yourself. Respect and admiration all around. Give me the finger and keep doing what you do best, and I'll keep watching it.