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12/19/2015 4:16:50 AM
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What do you think about my story?

So I made a story over a couple of months... It is inspired by some Destiny lore, Bloodborne horror, Undertale RESET mechanic, and also a few things from Dark Souls 1. What do you guys think? What could be changed? Here it is: A story can't really start at the end, can't it? In fact, it's so broken that it BREAKS a story... If you really think about it. But maybe that is just in-logical it's self, ain't it? Back to the story thing... I kinda have to start at the end... Maybe just imagine it as the beginning? I think that's what I would do... Here we go... *So... *Was it worth it? *Ya know... *Fighting a Legend? *A Legend that was a True Defiance? *ONE THAT HAS A PLANE OF TIME? *A PLANE OF EXISTENCE? *Fool... *Killing the unkillable is not like anything you have done... *I can understand everything else... *Challenging a Shadow... *Walking across a sky? *Breaking fate... *Could that be seen? *IT COULD NOT BE THE FATE? *So... *Was it worth it? *Ya know... *Killing a Legend? *Heh... #I wish there was another way. Another way to go... #But, there kinda is... right? #Left in the dust? #C'mon... #Can you remember me? #Legend? #... #Well... #What can I say? #It's a loop. #I remember you... #Left handed... #Wielding a... #Eh, it does not matter. #Hah... hah... #We will fight, then I will die. #That can't be changed. #But, that's why I fight, right? #I mean, whats the reason to prolong the inevitable? #There has to be more... #I have the power of infinity, yet I die #Every #Single #Time #We fight. #But infinity is just base for how much you can think up. #Maybe that's why I fight... #See how much I can think up each time? #Ya'know... #Me and you are the only ones that can see these gaps... #... #Well... #If we already done this song and dance before... #W H Y #D O N ' T #W E #G E T #T O #T H E #P O I N T? #Here we go... So you know the end of the story... Now the beginning? Well, there isn't one. It's all about when. When they get here. Or when they do not? It REALLY does not matter. I will be back here eventually... Tell of my death to come... But maybe you're the one who doesn't do that? I hope so... But, A dark path can always happen... So... If you want to kill... If strength is not the answer... Maybe kindness is? Legend? ... Eh, who am I kidding. You will always, Be an old friend #So here we are. #Me and you. #One against one. #Heh... #How many times have we done this? 100's? 1,000's? 1,000,000's of times? #Well... #As always... #It really. #Does not. #Matter. #But... #This time... #It's different...You're a friend. #Not one to destroy us all... #But it will still end in a duel. #Because of my fear. #Because of my will. #I can't see the world reset. #I can't see my friends die again. #I have seen it to much... #I know the worst of a outcome and the best... #It hurts so much, ya'know? #I am one of you. #That's why I challenge you. #Yep... #Haven't told you that yet huh? #Maybe you already figured it out but... #Normal people don't got powers. #It's kinda obvious... #But maybe you are stupid? #You never have spoken once. #Knowing what you could do... #I wouldn't either. #This is kinda funny for me. #Seeing from your evil point of view... #I hold a Blade of Shadow... #In my left hand... #And in my right? #The power of infinity. #Some fight, aye? #Well. #All that's left is a fight. #So... #Here we go... ... #HuFF.. pUFF... #Well... you are much stronger than the time before... #How do you do it? #Continue knowing that you can reset... try again? #It must be a feeling like any other... %*Sigh* #? #There is the voice that has been dormant for to long... #Good to hear a friends voice... #But... #How do I know you wont change? #How do I know whether or not you will reset? ... ... ... #The answer is... I don't... #None of us do... #Do you? %I don't... #Well, I will leave you with the choice, okay? #I don't know what is right anymore... #You decide... #I can't... #I can't... #Imagine... #Killing... #An old... #Friend? But a story can't really end at the end, can't it? In fact, it is so broken it breaks the story entirely... That sounds different... Never heard a story say something like that, huh? Well, stupid as it may be... It's true for this one. ... So... Lets leave the end, for the beginning. Pick it up later. I'm sure you will remember this part right? Well, if you don't... I will just have to tell you it ALL over again, huh? ... Legend. *... *Look at where you have gotten yourself now, legend. *Shattered. *That is all you are now... *Could everything you have done be fate? *Or have you snapped fate itself? *Well, you are back at the beginning. *It is a new slate, you can do what you want now. *Confused? *You should be. *Because you have no IDEA what this means yet. *But you will... eventually... *Maybe not at all? *Journey fourth, you stupid Legend. *And remember every time you hear this, you are nothing. Some guy huh? That's Sanctified The Unknown. No one knows who he is or what he does, but he appears to speak to people, then leaves in a flash. He wears a cloak of midnight... pure black by the stories. Is he a Legend? No one knows that either. ... Anyway, lets just keep going with the story, okay? So... next you came to our world. A land of people much different from your own. This land does not have a name, because it does not need one. This place is known to anyone who realizes it. A place where death is not true. A place where one goes to see friends made there... But... You've CHOSEN to come here. Don't know how you did it... But you did it. Ya'know, only one before you did that once... ... Well, it happened. No more to say, right? Okay... So where were we? Ah, We were at the beginning. You came here because you looked up at the sky and saw a world no one knew about, huh? A world that you could see because you choose to see it. But, how did you get there? I will leave that up to you. You started your journey were we ALL started. In the sky... You woke up and walked across it. Like it was nothing. Like it was another day. I remember when I first walked it. I did not have a single reason to be there. I was just there... When you did it did you have something in mind? A reason why? Well... You probably don't remember... So let's get on t your next feat. Next, when you got to the village in the sky... You found me. Sitting there. Not caring a tiny bit. Then I asked... #Hey. #You just going to walk by a new friend? #Come on. #Your here now, might as well make a few friends on the way, aye? You turned around, And with a grin across your face... You put your hand out. #Nice to know you aren't going to kill me, heheh. I shook your hand and we continued on. #So why are you here? #What's your meaning for being HERE of all places? %... #Eh, well. It's none of my business anyway. #Are you leading the way? I have no idea where we are going. %I don't know... where I even am. #What? #... #You don't... #Huh... That's the moment where it all came back. That's the moment where it ALWAYS comes back. I fell to the ground in pain. Seeing a flash from before and after... That moment, I knew something happened. Never once did that happen to me before, yet it happened again. %You okay? #I think so... #That was... weird... More I think back, the more I see... #Let's just go. *Wow, even though I have seen this HUNDREDS of times, it still never gets old... *Y O U H A V E N O T L E A R N E D A N Y T H I N G! So we went.

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