Hey guys, here's the second part of the ongoing story I'm writing. This one is considerably shorter than the last one, so it's a bit of an easier read. Constructive criticism is appreciated. I hope you like it. :) Part two: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nEfY5k92_1chUk44bZ6YYIjrDvq0YUuker_zR_SUttE/edit?usp=sharing And here's Part one for anyone who didn't already read it. (It's long, sorry.): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Aqsp02IvYmD70eWHhOmrflxscWpJ9PIHuImKh33pYM8/edit?usp=sharing