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The Heroes of Twilight Gap

"Alright, line up!" Lord Shaxx roared at the twelve recruits that stood before him in the ruins of Twilight Gap. At his order, they rushed to line up and attempted to uniformly snap a salute. Unfortunately one titan's forearm blade sliced a warlock's armor. Said warlock reflixively blasted in the titan's direction with void light, causing the offending titan and several other recruits to fall like dominoes. Shaxx sighed and hung his head. -blam!-ing recruits. "You there," Shaxx said, pointing at the titan who was picking himself up from the ground, "what's your name?" The titan hopped to his feet, and after looking both directions to be sure he was clear, snapped a salute. "My name is Dinz Sun, sir!" the recruit yelled. "I thought you had a different name," Shaxx said, sounding genuinly confused. Dinz paused, looking to his squad mates before he answered. "No sir, my name is Dinz Sun." The warlock beside him snickered silently, shaking his head. "Well you really seem like a -blam!- UP TO ME!" Shaxx bellowed at the recruit. He turned to look at the other recruits standing in line. "From now on his name is -blam!- Up. I hear anybody call him different, they answer to me." "Sir, yes sir!" the recruits yelled uninimously, including -blam!- Up. "And you!" Shaxx said, pointing at the warlock, who thought he had escaped attention. "My name is--" "SHUT UP DREG!" Shaxx yelled."I didn't ask you what your name is. But because you so dearly want one, your name is now Dreg. You and your buddy -blam!- Up there will be cleaning sparrows when we arrive back at the tower." After waiting a moment to be sure Lord Shaxx was finished speaking, Dreg said "Yes sir!" and snapped a salute. "Alright. Anybody else want to piss me off this morning? There's plenty of sparrows for everyone." Silence. "Okay then." Lord Shaxx turned away from the recruits to face the ruins surrounding them. Most of the buildings were collapsed, all of the metal was rusted, and bones of different varieties lay all about. "Today marks the true beginning of your training to become a Guardian. Today you begin to apply all that you've learned. Today I welcome all of you here to The Crucible. But before we begin your training, I have a question. What do you see before you?" The question was greeted with the recruits sharing puzzled glances and shrugging. One Hunter ventured boldy forth and said "I see ruins, sir. I believe that this is to be our battleground, sir." Shaxx turned his head slightly, catching and reflecting the sunlight with his horn. "You are correct recruit, and in more ways than you know. This is both the battleground of today, and the battleground of humanity's yesterday. Among these bones and ashes humanity won one of its greatest victories. Here we fight for the memory of those who stood. Around you stand the ruins of the Battle of Twilight Gap." Shaxx lowered himself to one knee, placing a palm on the earth. "Before you step into this sacred place, and into my Arena I will tell you of the heroes who stood here. Then you may see what the order you stand for really represents." Lord Shaxx lowered himself further to cross his legs in a seated position. "Be seated and gather round. We will be here for some time..." Part 2 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/81869066/0/0 ----------------------------------------- Thanks for reading! Comment if you want to be notified for future parts. There's probably going to be 3 more parts, in which heroicness shall happen. Also I'm gonna make a poll to see exactly what people want to read. EDIT: Everything above is my opinion (i.e. a fictional narrative about a work of fiction). I understand that yours may differ from my own. Be aware that this is a story solely for the purpose of entertainment. Bump to share :) Facebook page containing all stories https://www.facebook.com/pages/Tales-of-the-Grimoure/487218358086507 Tale of Kabr http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/post/75332648/0/0 The Rose Wilts: Last Word and Thorn http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/75736860/0/0/1 Toland's Legacy: The Forging https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/78149101/0/0 Short story i wrote (not Destiny related) http://www.wattpad.com/54307960-troubled-travels-blind-beggar

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  • Deej, I need to stay in this game. Like you I am a hard working perk trying to stay relevant. It isn't my fault people abuse me all day at work, then I come home and try to sleep but get shit on all night. I have a family Deej; you understand right? This is how I support them. I can't be fired, I need this too much, so I write this to you asking to let me stay; at least let me put my daughter through college. Those that complain about how I do my work are just here to ruin me. Some people hate it when a perk can accomplish more things in life than they can, some people hate it when I one-up them; when I get the promotion and they don't. These people need to be blocked out. So Deej, let me stay, think of the children, please. From, Shot Package

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  • Reply for later pls

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    • Shaxx told me I should have been in the twilight battle with my skills once

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    • Make a clever tag so I can follow..this rivals Fiji's and snarkii for great fanfic!

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    • [b][u]Lord Savage is great.[/u][/b]

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    • Nice!

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    • Nice man!

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      • Raid Idea. What if the hive captured an Archon Priest and engulfed him in Darkness like they did to the Traveler Fragment in that one mission. As a raid we go in seeking to destroy this potential monster but we're to late and they finish this Hive infested Archon Priest. We fight it. 1. This Raid require a Raid teams of each sub class 2. Unlike other raids , the Raid team will be split in two. Each team will start in their own remote locations at the start of the raid to do their own missions/task. 3.This raid will take place in the world of the Hive, in order to get there the void walker warlock of the team will invade the Hellmouth to find a relic the Praxis Warlocks have discovered to be called a Philosopher Stone. The Warlock will have to fight it from the grips of high wizard called Excall, The Witch. This warlock will be accompanied by the Bladedancers Hunter and Defender Titan. * If Excall is not killed by the VoidWalker, then he will revive himself ( In a Weaker form) and become Burr, The Wizard.* 4. The Sunsinger Warlock, Gunslinger Hunter and Striker Titan will also invade the Hellmouth to The strike room in order to wait for the other team to finish. Only there's something wating. The Wizards have ressurected Phogoth ( sacrificing themselves actually by the compulsion of oryx) and he is now Phogoth, the reborn. This time he remembers his death by guardians and now he roars the name of Vengence. But he's also out of control. He attacks everything, Knights , Wizards , everything. In order to stop this new phogoth the guardians must attack him with their supers all at once. When both bosses are done. The Voidwalker will use the philosopher stone to transport His team to the Strike room, then surging up all his void power , he rips a hole in space and the team ventures to give world. 5. When we get to the Hive world we find it in a War zone. The Fallen have invaded the world and has laid sieged to the world. We fight through waves and both fallen and Hive as our Ghost work in Union to track the Archon priest. As we go along we discover how the fallen got there and discover a house of fallen even more powerful than we know. ( so powerful they took Mercury from the Cabal.) they want their second priest back. 6. As we get closer, we fight Kells and ultimately a Prime Servitor ( that's so badass that it fights High Knights And Lots of orges.) 7. We defeat them all and ultimately reach the archon priest who is Dark- infested and powerful. He battles Captains and Servitors , Knights and Acyeolytes. Then ultimately us 8. We fight him, purging him of his darkness by using a rotation of supers( which will be multiplied due to a mysterious power: the striker & defender will lead the attack by first fist of havocing which electrifies him is arc energy , the defender will then Pop a bubble and the hunters will take over. The Blade dancer will take on the archon in a melee battle as the gunslinger fires at him ( the gunslinger and blade dancer will strike as many times until the timer for them runs out) the staggering archon will then fall under wrath of the warlocks. The Voidwalker will send everything at him, grenades, melees, everything. The Voidwalker will also do so while nova bombing him continuously. This will be done 3 times. 9.After the third ,as we drop his Heath were suddenly stopped in place by a cloud of darkness. That lifts us, oryx appears and stops the war, he englifes the archon priest in darkness and the priest vanishes. Oryx turns to us and there's nothing we can do.... Until Toland appears. He hits Oryx with his own super and is revealed to be the force behind our super light in that world. He gives us his ghost and tells the Voidwalker ghost to use the philosopher stone to teleport them out. As we teleport we see Toland cloak in Bright light and face oryx.

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        • Bump

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        • Shaxx the british a hole

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          • CALLING ALL DESTINY FANFICTION WRITERS! http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/151942060/0/0

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          • Bump

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          • Where's Saladin?

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            • This is genuinely good. I really found myself wanting to read on. Good job.

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              • Bump

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                • Bump. Seriously can't wait to hear more

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                  • Oh Traveler. Bump.

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                    • Bump dude sweet

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                      • Bump. As always a great read.

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                        • Nice job [spoiler]Bump[/spoiler]

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                          • Bump, great read look forward to next parts

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                            • No! Just no! Lord shaxx is here to help all guardians not to insult them and he wouldn't be the one yelling at recruits, he was a hero of the battle of twilight gap but the iron banner guy was in charge of the whole shabang.

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                              • Lord Shaxx is clearly the rough around the edges titan who strides with dignity. Love this part. I can't wait to read the next part to hear heroic tales of heroism.

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                              • "The Crucible is no place for mercy" Now that's believable when Shaxx makes your name -blam!- up hahaha.

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                              • SEND THEM HOME CRYING

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