It's all solid. A neat hypothesis regarding the "waves of light and dark colliding". It does bring to question how an ancient Awoken corpse is found amongst the outside traffic ruins of the Cosmodrome if Awoken were those who were already in space (or descended from those who were there) rather than in the midst of escaping... [b]by that, I mean the player character when you choose to be an Awoken[/b]. I believe that either (a) a second evacuation occurred at some point after the first incident, or (b) the Awoken were not made in space, but present during the Collapse. This all assumes that the scene of the Cosmodrome is an evacuation put to rest rather than anything else. Being birthed in space, however, would explain the presence of their racially-exclusive society in the Reef. If (a) were true, this could work out, especially considering that Awoken were known to have returned. The instance of (b) would have to involve some sort of strange factional falling out amidst the Collapse to have led to this settlement. Aside from all this, your voice is crisp and the editing is fluid. No technical difficulties at all regarding your video.