3/15/2013 10:54:24 AM

AN ARMLESS HOBO

Hey can you guys check out my standup and vlogs?

i would appreciate any and all feedback you all can give me. thank you.

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3/15/2013 11:00:04 AM

AN ARMLESS HOBO

The above is the stand-up

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3/15/2013 11:13:13 AM

Cultmeister

your stand-up is much better but it's still kinda meh. you should work on your voice imo; the monotone doesn't lend very well to the humour.

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