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Edited by SaviorsBlood: 6/12/2015 8:33:39 PM
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Shachal - Chapter 18: Scream

I present to you, Chapter 18 of Shachal. This is a special chapter for me, as today marks the one year anniversary of Shachal. One year ago today, I stayed up late in the earliest morning hours on October 24, 2013 writing my first chapter and posted it on the Black Garden on a whim, believing it wouldn't be a liked piece or successful story. It means a lot for me to have come this far, so I worked hard on this chapter in celebration of the event. It's been an extremely gratifying experience writing this story for you guys and hearing your thoughts on it all this time. I want to thank each and every one of my readers, voiced and unvoiced alike. It truly pleases me to entertain you all with Shachal. I intend to continue doing so for some time still, so bear with me guys. I won't be going anywhere any time soon. Enjoy the read and thank you again for reading and leaving feedback. Hope you like it. If you prefer Microsoft OneDrive for viewing click [url=https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=FF56932EF0AC1B65!179&authkey=!AKYEq8iLlNDplVE&ithint=file%2cdoc]here[/url]. [url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/63746321]Shachal Collection[/url] For more on this story, please join and follow [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Detail/1047016]Fireteam Shachal[/url]. Thank you for reading!

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  • Excellent chapter. The relationship between Selana and Tharsos seems to be going along swimmingly, hope Tharsos can get it all together to get the team out of Menia alive (I'm very positive that he will). Lukos, what a little ray of sunshine; I'd have to say I'm on his side against Tharsos on this one...I think. Can't wait to read what happens next.

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    • I just started to read this book yesterday, and I have already finished it. I read a LOT of books, and I have to say that you should think about contacting a publisher of sorts because you have a serious talent for writing. Do you have a certain amount of time it takes between chapters, because, to be honest I can't wait for the next chapter. You sure did put us on a Cliffhanger there. Lol. If you ever need anything in game send me a message. PS4 Gamertag: Docien84 Can't wait for Chapter 19

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      • Great chapter. I'm curious to see how this scenario plays out for the team.

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        • You should have someone illustrate it.

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          • Is the story based on Destiny?

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            • Edited by Eterteeter: 10/27/2014 1:48:27 AM
              Mental breakdowns, awkward relationships, and the chilling climax. Enter the denizens of the Moon Base Menia. I'm excited to see how Shachal will act and more importantly, how far Tharsos will go to protect Selana. Also, congrats on the one year anniversary :D

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