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Halo 2/3 Book Posted, Pages 342-345. Page 351: Sequel Revealed

September 9, 2006- Halo: The Ark is officially available online for everyone to read. There will be several websites hosting them, and each additional one will be added to this list here. The Ark is also in this thread, from pages 342-345. Feel free to read them and post in this thread. The cover/concept art is also available for anyone who wants to see it. Just follow these links: [url=http://img370.imageshack.us/my.php?image=halocoverartfromjoeslayergk8.png]Cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sb2copygi6tc1.jpg]Back cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dandonahueconceptartvn0.png]Concept cover art by Dan Donahue[/url] [url=http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bookcoveroh0.jpg]Concept art by Paul[/url] [u]Here is the list of websites hosting Halo: The Ark[/u] [url=http://game-spectrum.com/news/entertainment/halo_the_ark.html]Game Spectrum[/url] Nov 17th, 2005- by now, there are 30 chapters of the book posted. if you dont want to look through this entire thread for them, click the link in my signature, it will take you to my official site, where all the chapters are posted. May 17, 2006- Work on the book has come to a halt as all editing (professional) has been done. There is work currently being done to get The Ark published, hopefully by TOR. Any questions about the book can be asked here, and i will answer them as promptly as possible. This is not an official bungie project. Click [url=http://www.archive.org/download/The_Ark/theark.pdf]Here[ /url] to download a pdf version of it. Actually, right click and save, otherwise it won't work. The following material is the original post from way back when, so if you're looking for the more recent stuff (that has been modified from reading the beginning works), please visit my website, which is in my signature, or click the link above to download a pdf version of it. Please do not ask for the last chapters, as i will not send them to you. Any and all news will be posted whenever it comes up, and i will say so in the subject heading, with the appropriate page number and date. Chapters are generally posted weekly, though i discuss each chapter's release date beforehand so confusion does not ensue. If anyone knows anything about the Halo 2 book, or what comes after it, let me know. Cause if nothing's happening with it, im gonna write it. Here's the prelude to halo 3(?)... Prologue Ninth Age of Reclamation/First age of Rebirth Yielding Righteousness/ Current Flagship The doors opened as the Arbiter walked into the Grand Chamber, seeing rows of his brethren. His Sangheili. They all uniformly bowed down on one knee, their heads to facing the ground. The Arbiter turned to his Spec-ops captain, now the general of the armies, and said, “You never told me there would be this many.” “I thought you would like being surprised, Arbiter.” He showed a grin, at least as best a Sangheili could. They started walking through the main aisle, with an honor guard walking behind them as protection. The Arbiter felt that the presence of the honor guards was not necessary, but understood the honor they must feel to be here, especially now. Walking past each new row allowed all to stand in that row, which alerted the Arbiter of some discrepancy. He turned his head left, and saw several rows of Lekgolo, their massive bodies gracefully rising as he passed. And further ahead, even more rows were filled with the small Unggoy, who fidgeted even while trying to keep their composer. And they all were bowing. He looked back at the Lekgolo, shocked at the amount of them in one room. He had never seen so many, and they could easily overpower the entire ship if they wanted to, but they also didn’t carry their normal weaponry, which attached directly to their arms. The Arbiter forced himself to look away so not to draw attention to himself in any negative aspect, for it could ruin his purpose here today. They climbed the ramp up to the stage, where the honor guard behind them went to the right side of him, and to the left he saw another waiting for his arrival. The Arbiter went to the front of the stage, and the Captain/General stayed behind several steps. He looked upon the crowd, understanding that the future may rest upon their shoulders. The chamber had fallen dead silent now, and the Arbiter scanned the room once more. He stood tall and came to the very edge of the stage. “As you all know, I am the Arbiter. I have been chosen for this… this honor, by our previous leaders. However, there may be those among you who believe that their word is heresy, regardless of when it was said. And because of my rank, my position, I will become the leader of our group, our new covenant. If anyone disagrees with my appointment as the Arbiter, speak now.” The chamber stayed noiseless, but faces animated and expressions came to color. The Arbiter looked back to his Captain/General, who nodded to him. Suddenly, one Sangheili stepped out of his row, and yelled, “Long live the Arbiter!” As the Arbiter turned back to his audience, he found that he was deafened by the cheering of his name. A wave of relief struck him, and he held his hands to show silence was required. Moments later, it was so. “You all honor me with this privilege, yet I must postpone our celebration for another time. This meeting is one of urgency, where three important things must be discussed. The first of which being the creating of a new Grand Council. After this meeting, all not stationed upon the Yielding Righteousness are to return to their home planets to decide on the council members.” “Our next goal will be to secure as many Huragok as possible. They are a necessity on every ship, world, and army. If we can take many away from the Prophets, it will give us a strategic advantage against them. They will undoubtedly be attempting the same, but we cannot allow them to take any Huragok, or the upper hand will be theirs. Do not forget their usefulness, even in the heat of battle.” The Arbiter sighed, and looked up at the lights, then directly into the holocron monitor, which was projecting his face among countless worlds. “The final article is something that has come into my thoughts several times during these past few days, something I would like express to you. The Prophets have always asked each race to join the covenant, or even allow them honorable submission, but not the Humans. These Humans are a strange race, yet nothing about them is notable in any sense with the exception to the demon. Regardless, it makes no sense for the Prophets to ‘fear’ these Humans. But I understand why they do. I have fought and killed them, as well as fought beside them as allies.” Whispers appeared throughout the room, and the Arbiter raised his voice to overrun them. “Wait!”, he yelled, and the chamber’s only sound was the Arbiter’s echoing voice. “Through my experience with these Humans, they fight with the same honor we would, use clever tactics as we do, and will die for victory if necessary. And now that we are not at the prophet’s side to protect them, they have much to fear of the Humans!” Cheers wailed throughout the room, and a group of Unggoy began jumping up and clapping. The Arbiter allowed the crowd to settle down by themselves before speaking again. “From now on, if you should see a Jiralhanae, Yanme, Kig-yar, or a Prophet, you are to conquer them, and show them who truly is strong.” He smiled as best a Sangheili could. “Even more so for the Kig-yar, if you know what I mean.” Laughter broke out, especially through the rows of Unggoy. The Arbiter walked off the stage, followed closely by both honor guards and his Captain/General. Suddenly the laughter turned to applause, as the Unggoy yelled, and the Lekgolo and Sangheili bowed again to one knee. The Unggoy followed suit quickly. With each passed row, the rising covenant would chant “Long live the Arbiter!” The Captain/General whispered gently to the Arbiter as they walked down the aisle, “ It would seen that you left a good impression with the covenant.” “No, we are not the Covenant anymore. We are the Preeminent." If you guys like this, let me know, I have about 10 more pages written, in no partucular order, and can post them if anyone wants to read them. [Edited on 12/17/2006]
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  • I agree if you dont understand it DON'T READ IT. I thin that your doing a awsome job Sir it ties into the story perfectly keep up the good work.

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  • Wow What a great story. It goes perfectly with the other books and games, if you ever get it published or w/e tell us i want a copy.

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  • Very Good work, and aside from some editing issues, it doesn't hurt my eyes or strain my patience. Thus far, I appreciate your takes on Bungie's interesting Biblical twists. The ark, flood, covenant, john 117 (1:17 or 1:1-17?? or merely coincidence?), prophets, demons (lol), the true sanctity of life. i'd like to see how you play out the master manipulator (aka weasel's) Truth's coverups and deceptions. why does he hate humans? why do the flood only take on elites and humans for combat forms? why not have brute and hunter floodforms?? and as the ark of the covenant was an (old) testament (witness) From God to man... maybe the arbiter's new covenant should be the New Testament. A Witness to the fulfillment of the old, and the realization that the prophets had corrupted things, and become corrupt. Now they will propogate the Truth, and destroy the false prophets and their entourage of beasts, dogs and bugs. ;) beyond that, i cannot see why some people harass you about certain plot errors they think they've found. you have kelly with halsey, which is what the third book says. you have the chief in the ship, and the other guys on earth. the last isn't said to be right or wrong yet because it wasn't really mentioned. as far as we can ascertain, will, linda, and fred survived. as i've read through, i've encountered no such errors (continuity-wise) in regards to the books and games. so don't listen to those silly whackos, they need more sleep and less bong-hits. ;)

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  • I dont wanna be a dick or anything, and I havent read the books, but Ive read a few of sir_brilliant's chapters and Im confused. According to the Halo: CE instruction pamhlet thing that comes in the game case, all of the other Spartans died when reach was destroyed. Master Chief was the only one that made it onto a ship. Did I miss something or did the guy that wrote First Strike or w/e -blam!- up?

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  • And by the way, the Prologue is sweet. I havent gotten around to reading the others yet.

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  • The other spartans are alive. You find out in Firs Strike. Infact there was a spartan on the pillar of autum is never got unfrozen and was just shot out into space later recoverd by chief. The others survived reach. I think there are 5 left including john in brilliants book

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Solar Keeko OOOH i thought he was writing the halo 3 book i was like wat the heck?[/quote] he is. kinda. this is his own sequel to Halo 2. there is no comfirmation from Bungie about plot, and there is no Halo2 book. this is right after halo 2.

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  • yes please post more that was great

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  • Looks pretty good to me! [Edited on 1/21/2005 8:39:45 PM]

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  • Looks pretty good to me! [Edited on 1/21/2005 8:40:45 PM]

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  • ok why would arbiter fight against the heretics? arent the heretics the ones that know the truth about halo and how its a wepon of mass destruction? if anything the heretics and arbiters crew as well as earth forces should all team up and launch an offensive against the brutes and the prophets to destroy all 6 remaining halo's before they are activated from the arc. Now that would make for some excellent reading. but what does the parasite have to do with any of this im sure the giant venus fly trap has an alternate agenda for the halo's .....since it does have the oracle from installation 04......meaning that it knows the exact location of at least one of the remaining 6 halo's.....and also that oracle from installation 04 recognized master cheif as areclaimer...but how could this be unless its seen a spartan before....it seems to me that the earth forces ar keeping some secrets too.

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  • OMFG this story is brilliant!!! Hey man i have a suggestion.......are you gonna make a chapter that clearly focuses the Prophets plans :) Or you can do it whatever you think should be in the book....just giving ideas :) Oh if have the Halo 2 Limited Edition there is a little movie clip that has the general and the prophets discussing about the Halos....

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  • I had to get the Halo novels shipped down to New Zealand where I live, so I know a good read when I see one, I was just reading all ten pages of this thread, and you deserve more credit than you're getting, well done. Did anyone help you come up with ideas for the book?

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  • From the ten pages I read I thought people were replying every second, I'm [color=gold]Obviously[/color] wrong. Im impatient I need it now, but I also dont want you to rush and make a really big mistake.

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  • Wow man, this is really great stuff you are writing. I just saw the thread today and i am very eager to read what you got stored for us next. Keep up the excellent work. (and if you would, save a spot on your friends list for me - Gamertag Luke6268) Thanks and [u]great[/u] work

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  • Now that was some damn good fan fiction. I hope Halo 3 starts off in a similar fashion.

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  • Alrighty....I hate to be the bearer of antagonistic opinons...but what was great about the previous books was the fact that they were accessible to all readers...even readers that have not played, nor seen, nor heard of the game. You mention the honor guards...Halo 2 players will know what an honor guard is...but Halo 1 players who have not played H2 won't...and readers of the series won't. Overall...this is good stuff. I like it...no offense at my next comment, but I'd much prefer a Nylund-written novel, but its not looking pretty for that option. You gotta love fan-fiction. (one thing I did like is the fact that you use the Covenant naming system...be careful, though...you mention the Hunters and describe them simply as 'big' in that prologue...readers unfamiliar with H2 but familiar with First Strike may envision a Brute. Just food for thought.)

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  • Yes but the only people reading it at the moment is us, the members of Bungie, and if you dont know what an honor guard is, you shouldnt've registered for this site. We dont need tutorials, its pointless for us, Id rather not waste his time with that at the moment. If you know what I mean.

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  • I know what you mean, and I know that writing a book is simultaneously singling out an audience while also broadening your audience. You want as many people to read it as possible, regardless of whether or not they are huge fans of it...sure, you may want the fans to enjoy it the most (which, I completely understand) but there are just certain things that cannot go unexplained.

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  • I'm not in any way, shape or form bashing this writer, his work or the effort he put into it...just pointing out little nuances that can be changed for the better. Can, being the key word there. I know from experience that writing a book is not easy and takes not only a lot of time, but a lot of patience and focus. (Guess what I wrote my book over...eh?...eh?...Just guess...hehe...) and it takes a lot of revising. I'm fully aware of the fact that you can't please everyone and that not every little detail is going to strike well with the reader, but that's life. I think this is a very admirable decision of the writer, to take the time with relatively no story or plot line to go on and create and craft his own...totally original (albeit using licensed characters, situations and the like) world.

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  • i think sir_brilliant has done a great job captivating the stories in those chapters. he should definitely try to get hired for the next book. can't wait to get the next chapter

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  • But at the moment it isnt a book.

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  • i know that its not a book i said he should try to get hired for the next book

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] halo2magician i know that its not a book i said he should try to get hired for the next book[/quote]I was talking to Darth Mjolnir, Im a slow typer :(

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  • I was inspired by this reading to design a cover. http://home.comcast.net/~bluesniper/Cheifarbiesketch.JPG its just a pencil sketch now, but soon I will ink it and color it and hopefully it will do this fine work of writing justice

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  • Man how long did that take you, it looks detailed and quite fiddly. Nice SMG and Magnum combo.

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