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Halo 2/3 Book Posted, Pages 342-345. Page 351: Sequel Revealed

September 9, 2006- Halo: The Ark is officially available online for everyone to read. There will be several websites hosting them, and each additional one will be added to this list here. The Ark is also in this thread, from pages 342-345. Feel free to read them and post in this thread. The cover/concept art is also available for anyone who wants to see it. Just follow these links: [url=http://img370.imageshack.us/my.php?image=halocoverartfromjoeslayergk8.png]Cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sb2copygi6tc1.jpg]Back cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dandonahueconceptartvn0.png]Concept cover art by Dan Donahue[/url] [url=http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bookcoveroh0.jpg]Concept art by Paul[/url] [u]Here is the list of websites hosting Halo: The Ark[/u] [url=http://game-spectrum.com/news/entertainment/halo_the_ark.html]Game Spectrum[/url] Nov 17th, 2005- by now, there are 30 chapters of the book posted. if you dont want to look through this entire thread for them, click the link in my signature, it will take you to my official site, where all the chapters are posted. May 17, 2006- Work on the book has come to a halt as all editing (professional) has been done. There is work currently being done to get The Ark published, hopefully by TOR. Any questions about the book can be asked here, and i will answer them as promptly as possible. This is not an official bungie project. Click [url=http://www.archive.org/download/The_Ark/theark.pdf]Here[ /url] to download a pdf version of it. Actually, right click and save, otherwise it won't work. The following material is the original post from way back when, so if you're looking for the more recent stuff (that has been modified from reading the beginning works), please visit my website, which is in my signature, or click the link above to download a pdf version of it. Please do not ask for the last chapters, as i will not send them to you. Any and all news will be posted whenever it comes up, and i will say so in the subject heading, with the appropriate page number and date. Chapters are generally posted weekly, though i discuss each chapter's release date beforehand so confusion does not ensue. If anyone knows anything about the Halo 2 book, or what comes after it, let me know. Cause if nothing's happening with it, im gonna write it. Here's the prelude to halo 3(?)... Prologue Ninth Age of Reclamation/First age of Rebirth Yielding Righteousness/ Current Flagship The doors opened as the Arbiter walked into the Grand Chamber, seeing rows of his brethren. His Sangheili. They all uniformly bowed down on one knee, their heads to facing the ground. The Arbiter turned to his Spec-ops captain, now the general of the armies, and said, “You never told me there would be this many.” “I thought you would like being surprised, Arbiter.” He showed a grin, at least as best a Sangheili could. They started walking through the main aisle, with an honor guard walking behind them as protection. The Arbiter felt that the presence of the honor guards was not necessary, but understood the honor they must feel to be here, especially now. Walking past each new row allowed all to stand in that row, which alerted the Arbiter of some discrepancy. He turned his head left, and saw several rows of Lekgolo, their massive bodies gracefully rising as he passed. And further ahead, even more rows were filled with the small Unggoy, who fidgeted even while trying to keep their composer. And they all were bowing. He looked back at the Lekgolo, shocked at the amount of them in one room. He had never seen so many, and they could easily overpower the entire ship if they wanted to, but they also didn’t carry their normal weaponry, which attached directly to their arms. The Arbiter forced himself to look away so not to draw attention to himself in any negative aspect, for it could ruin his purpose here today. They climbed the ramp up to the stage, where the honor guard behind them went to the right side of him, and to the left he saw another waiting for his arrival. The Arbiter went to the front of the stage, and the Captain/General stayed behind several steps. He looked upon the crowd, understanding that the future may rest upon their shoulders. The chamber had fallen dead silent now, and the Arbiter scanned the room once more. He stood tall and came to the very edge of the stage. “As you all know, I am the Arbiter. I have been chosen for this… this honor, by our previous leaders. However, there may be those among you who believe that their word is heresy, regardless of when it was said. And because of my rank, my position, I will become the leader of our group, our new covenant. If anyone disagrees with my appointment as the Arbiter, speak now.” The chamber stayed noiseless, but faces animated and expressions came to color. The Arbiter looked back to his Captain/General, who nodded to him. Suddenly, one Sangheili stepped out of his row, and yelled, “Long live the Arbiter!” As the Arbiter turned back to his audience, he found that he was deafened by the cheering of his name. A wave of relief struck him, and he held his hands to show silence was required. Moments later, it was so. “You all honor me with this privilege, yet I must postpone our celebration for another time. This meeting is one of urgency, where three important things must be discussed. The first of which being the creating of a new Grand Council. After this meeting, all not stationed upon the Yielding Righteousness are to return to their home planets to decide on the council members.” “Our next goal will be to secure as many Huragok as possible. They are a necessity on every ship, world, and army. If we can take many away from the Prophets, it will give us a strategic advantage against them. They will undoubtedly be attempting the same, but we cannot allow them to take any Huragok, or the upper hand will be theirs. Do not forget their usefulness, even in the heat of battle.” The Arbiter sighed, and looked up at the lights, then directly into the holocron monitor, which was projecting his face among countless worlds. “The final article is something that has come into my thoughts several times during these past few days, something I would like express to you. The Prophets have always asked each race to join the covenant, or even allow them honorable submission, but not the Humans. These Humans are a strange race, yet nothing about them is notable in any sense with the exception to the demon. Regardless, it makes no sense for the Prophets to ‘fear’ these Humans. But I understand why they do. I have fought and killed them, as well as fought beside them as allies.” Whispers appeared throughout the room, and the Arbiter raised his voice to overrun them. “Wait!”, he yelled, and the chamber’s only sound was the Arbiter’s echoing voice. “Through my experience with these Humans, they fight with the same honor we would, use clever tactics as we do, and will die for victory if necessary. And now that we are not at the prophet’s side to protect them, they have much to fear of the Humans!” Cheers wailed throughout the room, and a group of Unggoy began jumping up and clapping. The Arbiter allowed the crowd to settle down by themselves before speaking again. “From now on, if you should see a Jiralhanae, Yanme, Kig-yar, or a Prophet, you are to conquer them, and show them who truly is strong.” He smiled as best a Sangheili could. “Even more so for the Kig-yar, if you know what I mean.” Laughter broke out, especially through the rows of Unggoy. The Arbiter walked off the stage, followed closely by both honor guards and his Captain/General. Suddenly the laughter turned to applause, as the Unggoy yelled, and the Lekgolo and Sangheili bowed again to one knee. The Unggoy followed suit quickly. With each passed row, the rising covenant would chant “Long live the Arbiter!” The Captain/General whispered gently to the Arbiter as they walked down the aisle, “ It would seen that you left a good impression with the covenant.” “No, we are not the Covenant anymore. We are the Preeminent." If you guys like this, let me know, I have about 10 more pages written, in no partucular order, and can post them if anyone wants to read them. [Edited on 12/17/2006]
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  • I no. And its amazing.

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  • hey is anyone here? well actually the frankie what's update is the #1 but that from the very very beggining so i guess it doesn't count right? [Edited on 6/23/2005]

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  • Sorry for the double post but i got on and i noticed this guy jus made a reply, so i thought i'd see if he was here.For the past few days I've been taking the time to read Sir Clark's Fan fic. I have to admit that both of you guys are talented. But i think that your stories are each quite unique. Yours has a buttload mroe action and focuses on the MC, while Clarks focuses on the past a lil bit, the present and even the future Clarks doesn't have as much action as yours but it has some kind of a genisiqwa (french word). In conclusion i think that you both are awesome writers who deserve appreciation.Keep up the great work!

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  • Yes i used to read Mr.Clarks story, but some of the things he did didnt hold my attention. He is Brilliants only real competetion on these forums, but brilliant has a commanding lead when it comes to the people. They are both very creative an have futures in story telling.

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  • hellz yeah, i just graduated from high school! got my diploma and everything! friggin sweet. now i've got alot of time to do real things, like play halo2, write, chill, and more of the same. unfortunately for the writing, i'm goin to a bunch of grad night parties, so i dunno when the next chapter will be up, because i don't know when i'll be up and around to write them. i'll do what i can tomorrow, but with the editing i've been doing, not much writing has actually taken place. btw, thanks for all the kind words. i'm in no competition with clark, as we are both writing what we deem fit for the ending of the halo universe, and i appreciate everyone who's sticking with my story. 7 month's, 23 released chapters, and i think around 10 more on the way. so whether or not any new chapters will be released this week, they with the extra time i'll have to work on them, i plan on finishing them all before the summer's end.

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  • Congrats on the graduation. I myself am not a senior but have recieved alot of invitations to graduation partys in the mail. That means free food for me. So have fun.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MJOLNIRdragoon wait... why do they have honor guards... i didnt read all of it, but weren't the honor guards the protectors of the prophets?[/quote]if you remember, in the level uprising, the brutes murdered the council members, all of whom were elites. and when you freed the captured hunters and elites (some were council members, you could tell by their armor) they fought by your side and beat the crap out of the brutes. i just read the first two chapters (cant believe it took me this long to find a story this big!) man, sir brilliant, thats some damn good writing! great use of figures of speech, personification of objects, and though it got a bit spotty in some areas, word choice. how you turned the blame of heresy away from the arbiter and to the prophets; his view of fate and what it has done...beautiful. i'd go so far as to say that that part was of tom clancy caliber writing. there were some errors, in spelling, grammar, and re-using of words too often “Oh, and one more thing, chief. The Master Chief is aboard that ship, so don’t fire at everything that comes out of that ship. Strauss out.” also, there was some stuff that you wouldnt normally think the arbiter or elites in general would say (word choice problems) but if you can fix those problems, i can really see you becoming a successful author. dont get me wrong, that was a great job, and i certainly couldnt do better. i write editorials and features for my school paper, not great stories like these. take it as a piece of constructive critisism from a fellow writer; i just want to help. EDIT: i've only read up to chapter 2 so far, and you're getting better and better everytime. man, maybe this reply is actually useless! i have no idea how good you've gotten. youre on chapter 23, right? damn good job. [Edited on 6/25/2005]

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  • Filipinos rule! They are only 2nd best to this story.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] EAGLES5 Filipinos rule! They are only 2nd best to this story.[/quote]lol! are you filipino?

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  • well... i just wanted to say hi..and that i plan on geetting caught up on your story...ive been REAL busy these past weeks so saturday i think ill go and read chapters 10 and up and get re aquantied with ur story... now i think the only person here which is going to be maad at me still is eagles... so ill just pretend he cant read this messege... hope everything is goin good sir brill brill... congrats on grading by the way.... thats about it..i just felt like coming in and sayin hi to some old friends... even though SOME (eagles) of which god mad at me for me saying weird stuff on a day when i toatally felt like killing myself... anyway im sry for anythig i may have said and..forgot what i said and dont give a -blam!- about what i said and just wanted to drop in and say hi again.... i guess ill be tellin ya what i think of ur newest chprs late saturday..c ya then sir brill brill...

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  • LOL no im not a Filipino, but a kid on my football team is. His name is TE UY. Prowlaz I dont mind you. Just last time you were here you were very rude. It wasnt constructive criticism it was flat out flame. SO just be nice.

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  • yeah i know it was flat out flame and im sorry... i wasnt having a good day and im sorry you guys got in my way...i dont even rember what happend... plus i have started puberty so everything is diffrent NOW..then i was just a dumb kid that liked to cuss... of course i like to cuss now too....but thats not the point... sry eagles..

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  • To much information there

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  • i just visited the site, theark.thinkgames.net or something like that. i read the first five chapters, and damn, are they long! the order's different...after reading 3 chapters on this thread...it gets confusing! but not in a bad way. 23 chapters here, and 23 chapters there, so im assuming that the prologues are arranged differently here? in any case, the site is superior in my opinion, the prologues (book 0) are arranged better. plus, you dont have to slog through posts to find them. PS: is it just me, or is there some completely different content on the site that cant be found here (and vice versa, of course) aside from just the different order? i cant really tell, since i havent read that far on either part. and no way am i checking the chapters and skipping parts of the juicy plot. [Edited on 6/23/2005]

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  • Ye sthe order in the thread is diiferent. He decided to change some things. Just read the site first tehn you can use the thread the rest of the way.

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  • yeah, i'll give you the rundown of both this thread and that site. this thread has the entire story up in at least 3 different places, all with different chapters being in different places. for instance, the first post i made is now the 6th chapter, i believe, and the 1st chapter is now like the 14th, and so on. everything you see at the site, theark.thinkgames.com(i guess, just check the sig) is in the order that it should be, or at least the order i keep it normally. one minor flaw with it is that all of that is unedited for whatever reason, while at least the first 10 chapters should be edited. i'll get on fixing that soon. so to read the entire story straight through, it would be easier to use that site as opposed to this forum, although i will be posting all the chapters from beginning to end quite soon. if anyone is wondering why i'm here when i said that i didn't even know where i would wake up, its because my grad night party sucked. casino-style action led to me creaming everybody in everything except for blackjack, because the dealer was my physics teacher who didn't listen when i said hit or stay, and made me lose. i owned in texas hold'em, but after everyone leaves, its not much fun. so at 1, they started cleaning up, which was crap, being that it was supposed to end at 3. WTF, whoever set it up was a complete imbesile(mostlikely spelled wrong, its late). whatever, i don't really care. the party wasn't for me, i'd have rather written, to tell the truth. my hobby, my passion, my life.

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  • wow... sounds... shallow... YEAH if you could post all of the chapters again that sure would make it easier for me to get caught up on your story... :) if anything could you just post chapters 14 and up? cause those are the ones i havent read...

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  • -blam!- party. Never go to the fun that the school runs!

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  • yeah, i know. my bad. anyways, i'm workin on the next chapter, but i dunno how far i'll get to posting it. expect sunday, although depending on whether i go to this other party saturday night, it might be then. developing...

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  • Ughh, I was a freshman this year so I wont get invited to parties w/ seniors until next year 'cuz I know a lot of juniors but only one or two seniors. Not to mention I only knew like 10 people at the beginning of the year from my old school... anyway congrats on graduating.

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  • Im lucky, my bro left me a legacy so i had friends i didnt even know i had.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] EAGLES5 Im lucky, my bro left me a legacy so i had friends i didnt even know i had.[/quote] Thats cool. All I have is one little sis.

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  • wow lots of information on this page about you guys, i graduated from eight grade jus a few weeks back, lots of summer partys which = hot girls+bikinis which i'm prety fond of, heh. Yep good time good times. [Edited on 6/24/2005]

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  • I think we all know what Sir Brilliant will be majoring in for college........ oh and by the way i've become so into reading your story that i spent hours printing the whole thing out so i could staple it( super staple because there were so many damn pages!) and go sit down and read it because sitting there at the computer is boring and it hurts my back.. owww GReat sTorY!!!!

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  • YESSS i posted the 4200 post YESSSS my goal is now to read the rest of the story and post the 4300 4400 4500 4600 4700 4800 4900 and 5000Th posts YEAAAHH

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  • You Crazy! LOL Cant wait for the next chapter!

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