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9/5/2013 10:12:20 PM
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Destiny fanfic (Prologue and Chapter 1)

Enjoy and let me know what you think guys. Please note that in Chapter 1 there is some violence, be warned before you read it. [u][b]Prologue[/b][/u] I do not remember much from the fighting; only that they came without notice and we were losing. I heard stories of the Golden Age, how a mystical relic helped us to expand beyond our solar system and into the unknown of space. It’s sad to think the worlds we could have discovered if we were not so focused on surviving. Humans are dreamers, and I often wondered what treasures are buried in the unknown worlds. The reality however, was different. Whatever hit us, did so hard. We were knocked from our pedestal and started drifting inwards; back in safe zones, fighting but losing one planet at time. I was born on Earth, but I heard my parents talking, arguing about the monsters that were closing in on us. At this point little was known about the relic if one can call it that; it was as if we had a second moon hovering Earth. Scholars, scientist even religions tried to make sense of it but were unable to find a logical explanation as to why this relic travelled from a faraway galaxy only to end up here. Fittingly humanity gave it a name: The Traveler. When Earth became our final standing ground, it became clear: build the Last City in the Travelers shadow. Someone discovered that the Traveler had a shield; with the approval of the Order, we began building the Wall. There were rumours that the Order also gave this responsibility to a new selected group of soldiers that will protect the city and the Wall, at all costs. As fitting as any title could be this new class of soldiers were named Titans. Being handpicked by the Order itself was a great honour for both my parents. Their love for each other was only second to the honour and responsibility they had towards humanity and the final fights ahead. I never got to see a monster as a child, only the descriptions from the stories mother told me when she got back at nights. I often wondered why we’re losing if we were winning so many battles. Father at least was more honest with his stories but they too had a good ending. In many ways, I envied them but was terrified of losing either. I tried to cherish each moment with them and seeing them in their fully fitted Titan armour, made me proud of being their son. Although certainly not the most sociable kid, I was the most popular at school. Teachers and kids alike came up to me to ask me, what was the latest from the Wall, how were mother and father getting on, and if I would join them in the fight someday. That was a question that would answer itself. School was a blur for the most part but there was one incident that will stay with me forever. During my college years I was working hard to understand quantum mechanics; needless to say no matter how many hours spent in front of a book, none of it made sense. I decided to clear my mind and went for a trip near the Traveler for inspiration. Under the Traveler, the Order built a temple to appease the High Priest of the Last City; something of an homage to it. This was unlike any temple the world has ever seen but one could describe it as a huge golden dome very similar to Jetavanaramaya; several references were made to it during its construction from ancient texts. On the outside of the dome was crystal clear water that symbolizes tranquillity; inside was a different story. Beyond the scanners and the security checks at the entrance, there was a huge library for studying that contained the last books of knowledge, silent computers for research, and a training combat room for Titans to enhance their fighting skills; each of these rooms having their own level. My favourite however was the top level. This room was a grand hall with pillars spanning across the level; with guidance from the ancient text, the Order again tried to recreate the Great Hypostyle Hall. The pillars themselves were inscribed with ancient text, familiar only to scholars and priests and were supporting the final part of the dome. Walking towards the centre of the hall, one could look up and see the Traveler through the glass roof. Mesmerising as it is, philosophers came here to study for years and even pray to it for humanity’s survival. However little was heard from the Traveler; until now. Sitting in the centre of the hall, I opened my book to make sense of it. The stillness of the room and the lack of noise helped with meditation and studying. The specific chapter I recall was on the sun. The theory was that the Sun has magnetic forces deep within its core which act in disorder, and how this causes the Brownian Motion. Inside the sphere this can result in a single sinusoidal wave at its equator. I started imagining the sun, not only the heat it generates, but also holding it in my hand and using its energy to help father and mother. From within the centre of the hall, I reached out as if to touch the Traveler, that somehow it might impart some of its wisdom with me. Nothing happened. Returning to my book I started to change the page; suddenly the page was getting hot, so hot that I thought my hand would burn. Startled, I dropped the book and looked at my hand. A small ball started to appear, then faded. Was that real? Did I really feel the heat of the sun? I started focusing myself, trying to get back into that state of mind. The thoughts came easier this time; the sun, energy, parents and pride. I lifted to see my palms, like small miniature suns, two ball of fires were in palm of my hands. I tried to make them fade but could not, so I tossed them like a grenade hitting one of the nearby pillars. Needless to say the damage was extensive. The blast caused the security team to contain me. They took me to the bottom level of the dome where other potential criminals were held. They would lock people up for vandalizing the dome and judge either to send them to the Order for further punishment or to be released but be banned from the Temple permanently. For all intents and purposes the place felt like a prison and a courtroom at the same time. The guards interrogated me of course; first by accusing me of attempting of destroying the hall and continually asking me how did I get past the security checks with explosives. I told them the truth but did not believe me. When I was eventually released due to my parent’s reputation, I went straight to them to request an audience in front of the Order. Usually it takes months to get a hearing, however proceedings were done quickly thanks to father, and within days of the incident I was taken before the Order. The Order were housed in one of the newest and tallest building in the centre of the city, not too far from the temple. The Order was a small group of 10 individuals made up from soldiers, scientists and priests. They dictate how the important matters are handled in the Last City. Needless to say that even in front of the entire Order and my parents no one believed me. The High Priest bemoaned: “Disrespecting the Temple requires the severest of punishments. Even if your parents are respected Titans, this should not go unpunished.” “Esteem High Priest, members of the Order, I need a minute to focus and attempt to recreate the event that took place, with your permission.” The priest took his seat with the other members while they convened. At some point I heard someone say “preposterous”. “Please continue.” I took a moment and closed my eyes; I imagined the dome, sitting in the hall under the Traveler. I focused on the Traveler and imagined the sun in my hand. “Well, what are you waiting for?” the High Priest shrieked. I could feel the connection with the Traveler becoming stronger. I raised my hands and open my palms as if to draw the energy from somewhere. “This is ridiculous tha……” I opened my eyes and threw the flare in the middle of room. Just as before, it erupted. “How did you do that?” mother asked. “I do not know. I focus my energy having the Traveler in mind. I think about the sun and how I can feel it in my hand.” “Can you teach us how to use it?” “I am not sure, but I think there is more to the Traveler than we know. We should be around it, study it and learn from it.” “Wait outside son” father said in a stern voice. “Let the all wise Order decide what to do.” Outside the room I felt nauseous and excited at the same time. This could be a turning point in the fight. This what the Traveler was sent to do. It all felt clicking into place. A few hours later mother emerged from the room followed by father and the rest of the Order. Last one out was the High Priest looking angry. He walked passed while stating at me straight in the eye. Infuriated it seems by whole situation. Mother embraced me and father shook my hand. “Congratualtions!” father said. “There is another class that will be fighting with the Titans after all.” “Son, you are the first Warlock.”

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  • Edited by Black Eye Hawk: 9/5/2013 10:15:00 PM
    Please note that there is some violence in this chapter. [u][b]Chapter 1[/b][/u] Trees, shadows, faint voices, blurry vision. I am running, but where am I? It feels like a vision, but lucid. I stop, turn around and I see it, the Traveller is burning, it needs my help. I can almost feel its pain, calling out to me. Too afraid. I turn and start to run again. I can hear a voice getting louder the further I get from the Traveller. I can almost make out the words: “Awake”. I pass by blurry ghostly figures. Have these people died? Are these humans or Awoken; I cannot tell. Then it happens, the Traveller blows, and as I hear the explosion I am pulled from my body and I get a bird’s eye view of the forest that is burning in a sea of fire. I awake from my dream. This has been the same dream for months now. It started without warning and has not stopped. I feel the sadness of watching the Blue Jewel being evaporated in the sea of fire. The same entity that has been protecting us for so long, will be our undoing. Then I remember the voice, I remember it calling out to me. It’s that what this is? A calling? If so has it called others? I get out of bed, open a window and see the forest still there; with the Traveller hovering intact, in the middle of the Last City. I like the solitude; this wooden house was my own and being built at the top of the mountain overlooking the Traveller gave me peace and security. Still, it was not meant to be this way. The humans were very reluctant to help my kind. Maybe our white looking skin frightened them, but one thing was for sure; we were not welcomed in the Last City, hence my exile. Fact is when the First Meeting took place, the Awoken wanted a place to call home. The Blue Jewel seemed much like the perfect destination; it looked just like our home planet many years ago. However the Order, as the humans called it, were reluctant to let us into the Last City, my hierarchy took this as an insult and left to find another home. Others, like myself choose to stay, but were not allowed in the Last City. I made peace with that and built a home near the the Traveller but away from humans. In time I found comfort in the surround forest. I adapted and hunted animals for food and outlaws for currency and loot. So far, it has not been a decision I have lived to regret. Maybe it was Traveller mystery, or a bond that was entangled with the memories of my own home planet that made me want to stay; and even though I was not welcomed here, the Blue Jewel felt like home. Mid-day was approaching and I would have enough time to dwell on the dream later. Right now I needed to hunt. Some time ago I made a decision to make own signature armour using the techniques my father taught me to go with my hunting skills, something of a Rite of Passage with my kind. I made a green hooded cloak attached to a silver glistening light armoured outfit. “A good hunt is only as good as your preparation and tools”, my fathers word echoing through my mind as readied myself. I reached for my golden bow and arrows, past down in my family for generations; I hoisted it, opened my front door and made my way through the thick forest. My house is at the top of a mountain, nearly on the cliff, overlooking the forest and beyond that the Last City and where the Traveller now stands. Behind the house was a small clearing and then the thickness of the last remaining forest made of tall trees, bushes and wild animals. I ran quickly and silently, trying not make myself heard or seen. My cloak does a good job of camouflaging me from animals and bandits alike. My house was a place of rest and mediation; eating and resting. The forest? Well that was my playground, my combat arena. I made way to the nearest river, the only available for animals to drink and to rest. I slowed down and bought my bow to the front. Holding the arrow and bow in one hand I noticed some heavy chopping of the branches. I kneeled into the fresh mud and I saw two sets of footprints. Bandits, outlaws; scum. I felt anger them being so close to home, there must be a camp nearby. Clumsy as they were, they did nothing to cover their trail. I followed it and it took me to a part of the forest that was clearing out and was making way for the Wastelands; a huge patch of barren land that had no forest, no cover but was crawling with outlaws. I realized that I was leaving my safe zone but I wanted to know why the bandits strayed so far and into my forest. This was unlike them. I noticed other footprints joining the four I was following, and someone almost being dragged. This was an abduction, strange as bandits are mostly thieves and murderers. The bandits camp was close but was strategically located at the top of a hill; they would be able to see me coming, and I needed to get closer. The forest was now just a few trees and rocks. Under me the soft muddy ground was replaced by an orange dead colour. I circled and surveyed the camp, using the cover of the last few remaining bushes. There were 3 tents arranged around a bigger master tent. This meant that there were at least 7 outlaws, and whoever was being dragged. Two of them were stationed outside the red master tent, whilst were two patrolling the bottom of the hill. All of them wearing a full set of heavy rusty armour and were heavily armed with assault rifles and machine guns. The rusty armour was not a problem for my bows but the machine guns would be a problem if I wanted to attack. Tricky. Whoever was in the tent was in there with the leader and 2 of his lieutenants, their condition and arsenal was unknown. I decided to wait it out. Then I heard screaming coming from inside the tent, it was a female. I waited a few seconds for the two patrolmen to intersect one another and bought my bow up with two arrows. Jumping out of the bushes I fired the arrows at them, one hit the head, whilst the other hit the patrolman on the chest. Clumsy, I thought. The guards outside the tent turned to face me and were aiming their guns at me, I did not have enough time to shoot two more arrows. They pulled the trigger sending out a haze of bullets at my direction. I steadied and darted to a nearby tree, bullets were flying around the trunk but did not penetrate it. The bullets stopped requiring reload; two arrows again, this time both hit their mark. Before the remaining outlaws came out, I climbed the hill and made my way to the side of the tent, just before the entrance, hoisted my bow and bought my knife to bear. The two lieutenants with slightly better armour came out to confront the unknown threat. With their backs turned to me, I grabbed the forehead of the first outlaw, pulled it back and slit his throat. The second turned and started to take aim. Within a heartbeat, I turned towards him, ducked and with a backhand motion, slashed the back of his knee, almost cutting through the bone. Although he did pull the trigger, he was falling backwards and his gun was pointed up. Before he hit the ground, I bought my knife up and stabbed him in the chest. All, clean kills. I made my way into the master tent. The leader was standing and between me and him was the silhouette of a female Titan in full body armour, her face concealed in her helmet. Now I know why the bandits took her; the amour alone would bring a hefty sum in these parts, let alone a fully equipped body armor. The leader however, was holding a gun, pointed at the females head. “Come a step closer and I kill her” he bellowed. My weapons would not be able to penetrate his chest or leg armour. His red cloak was part of his thick steel armor, not something you see in common bandits and outlaws. He was however, not wearing a full helmet. “Now, let us go and I will let her live.” I started focusing on my target, I could see just enough of his side temple to kill him before he pulls the trigger. I waited for a better chance. “Why attack and take a Titan so close to the Last City?” I asked. He slightly pushed the Titan to the side and made his face a bigger target. “Because this Titan is......” I did not let him finish his sentence. Focusing all my speed and reactions on just one movement, I threw my knife towards the middle of his forehead. As he dropped the female dropped with him. Before she hit the ground I caught her. She was still alive, breathing heavily but alive. I removed her helmet. Time stood still for me in those 3 seconds; it felt like a lifetime until I processed exactly what I was seeing in that moment. I had simply assumed that this Titan was a human female; she was not. For the first time in my life I was looking at an Awoken Titan.

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