[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] WhiteDreads i read tht but id like more thn one reply/post[/quote] So... why not reply to the original, thus bumping it up without re-posting? That way, most critiscism would have been dealt with, and people could comment on the story itself. Also, you have re-posted in the wrong forum and the correct forum simulateously, without even copying and pasting to a spell-checker.