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The Great Forum War - The Light Chronicles

This is a story about how the character Light in [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=18073416&viewreplies=true]GeneralJohn1031's story[/url] came to be who he is now. You can be in the main story if you PM GeneralJohn or if you post a reply in his thread. Here are some other stories about the main characters. [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=18102384]Buster's Awakening[/url]- Cold Blood Killa [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=18089613&viewreplies=true]The Von Keshner Chronicles[/url]- i_hate_babies The story takes place in the Forums, which is a big city in the story. Light is the character that is essentially against both sides. He beleives Bungie is evil and should be destroyed. The rest of the characters are in a big war with an evil dictator and blah blah blah, but you can read about all that in GeneralJohn's thread. *References: Buster Johnston is a mercenary who will do anything and kill anyone for the right price. He is in GeneralJohn's story as well. Snip3r is Bryan's (who is Light) friend and may or may not appear in GeneralJohn's story. In this story, getting banned is like going to jail and the moderators are like the police. I know that the first chapter is pretty boring and kind of short, but hey, it's my first time writing a story. This [i]is[/i] my first story, so don't insult me too hard. Critiscim is welcome, though. ________________________________________________________________________ [b]Chapter 1[/b] [i]Buster Johnson checked the note saying to meet up to make sure he was at the right address. He was standing in front of an old abandoned thread which hasn't been used for years. He slowly walked inside with his knife drawn, not knowing what to expect. "Don't be afraid," a voice called out. "We just want you to do a job for us." "You?" Buster asked. "I'm a little suspicious of why you would want me to do something for you." "Business is business," another voice said casually. "And if you do your job right, there will be quite a sum of money for you. 50,000 Microsoft Points to be exact." Now Buster was interested. "All right," Buster said. "So who do you want me to hit?"[/i] It was a beautiful day in Forum City. Bungie General was bustling with activity; crowds of people were discussing in threads and socializing. And no spammers or Recon freaks in sight. That's just how Bryan Russel liked it. Bryan was average height and skinny. He was slighly pale and always had an expression like he was thinking. He also had a strong sense of justice agiast criminals. Many of his friends expected him to become a famous individual. He had already created succesful threads, one of which got stickied. Bryan decided to go into a bank to withdrawl some Microsoft Points. There was a fairly short line in the bank, so Bryan expected to be out soon. Just as it was about to be his turn a man in a ski mask busted in. He had a pistol in his hand. "All right!" he shouted. "Give me all your Microsoft Points if you don't want to get killed. Everyone else get down on the floor!" Bryan looked over at the robber and simply stood still. "Hey! I told you to get the f*** down!" the crook shouted. Bryan swiftly punched the robber in the gut. This enraged the crook greatly. He kicked Bryan and shoved him onto the floor. He then pointed his pistol at Bryan and cocked it. Bryan quickly rolled out of the way as the robber shot. This time the robber grabbed Bryan and put the pistol to his chest. Just then a couple of moderators busted into the bank. "Don't shoot!" the moderator commanded as he pulled out his glock. The robber quickly decided to aim his gun at the moderator instead. Both of the mods shot the crook in the head, and Bryan dropped to the ground with his lifeless corpse. The mods asked if Bryan was okay. "Yeah," Bryan said, stunned. He quickly snapped out of it and made his withdrawl. After that Bryan decided to just go home. Bryan enterd his apartment and went on to his computer. After checking his messages, he put on a pair of high-tech looking gloves. This was his new invention, which allowed him to go on the internet wherever he wanted, along with a program to make the gloves work.. He moved his left index finger and a screen popped up in midair in front of him. "Now," he said. "Let's see if I can upgrade this to use hacking programs on it. He pressed a small button on the side of one of his gloves and it opened up. "All I need to do is insert this chip, and I should be able to create my own hacking software and access anything," Bryan said. "Maybe I can enlarge the hologram image, too." Suddenly Bryan had an idea. It might get him in trouble, but just maybe he could pull it off. "I'll just change the connection to the city's mainframe." Bryan typed on the floatring screen and clicked enter. A code pulled up on the floating screen, and Bryan looked astonished. Just as he was about to continue, his phone rang. He picked it up. "Hello?" he asked. "Bryan, you have to come see this." Bryan recognized this voice as Snip3r's. "I'm on the outskirts of town by Stosh Blvd. Hurry!" Minutes later, Bryan was standing next to Snip3r in a grassy field. "What is it, man?" Bryan asked. Snip3r just walked over to a spot where the tall weeds had been cleared. Bryan looked down at the ground and was suprised to find the dead body of Reiginko. "Wh-what?" Bryan looked even more pale than usual. "When did you find his body Snip3r?" "Right before I called you," Snip3r repied. "I was just out off-roading on my mongoose when I came around him." They were silent for a while. Snip3r finally asked, "Who do you think would do this?" "Someone mad at Bungie, or maybe someone who wanted to be known by killing a higher authority," Bryan replied. "With Reginko retired, it would be all the more easy to kill him." "Well," Snip3r sighed, "I already called the mods. There's not much we can do." Two police cars pulled up with mods in them. "I'm glad you're here!" Snip3r yelled. "The body's right over-" One of the mods pulled his pistol out and aimed at Snip3r. "Put your hands in the air!" he shouted. "You two are banned for the murder of Reiginko!" [Edited on 03.04.2008 5:47 PM PST]
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  • [b][i][u]EDIT: Can someone post something? I don't want to bump and I almost have chapter three finished on paper.[/u][/i][/b] [b]Chapter 2[/b] [i]"The job's been done," Buster Johnson said gruffly as he walked into the familiar abadoned thread. "So where's my money?" "Oh, it's right here, Mr.Johnson," a figure said sinisterly as a tranquilizer dart penetrated Buster's neck. "Wipe his memory, but don't kill him," commanded a deep voice on a large monitor. "We may make use of him yet."[/i] There was no trial for Bryan Russel and Snip3r. They were both sentenced to a permaban with no chance of parol. [b]1 month later[/b] Bryan sat alone in a prison cell. Even after one month, his mind was still jumbled. He had given up hope of getting out by now, though he was still wondering why the mods arrested him and Snip3r without evidence. [i]Maybe they arrested us to cover up the murder[/i], he thought to himself. [i]Maybe a member of the community didn't murder Reiginko. What if...[/i] His thoughts were interuppted by a tremendous crashing sound as his cell wall collapsed to reveal outside. Without thought, Bryan jumped up and ran out of his cell into the city. With all the confusion and devastation, no civillians had yet noticed that he had come from the prison, and the guards had much more on their hands. Bryan did not stop nor look back as he ran all the way to his house. The prison collapsed to a heap behind him. Bryan took a few minutes to catch his breath outside his house. He knew people had seen him and that the mods would be here soon. He rushed inside and gathered his new invention along with his laptop and a CD-rom. How he got out and who got him out were not important. All he could think about was what might of been the real cause of Reiginko's death. There was a sudden knock on his door. Bryan ran to the back of his house and climbed out his window as his door got kicked down. He turned around to see that the mods had broken into his house and had started climbing out the window, too. "Stop now!" they commanded as they ran after him, and drew out their pistols. Bryan ran as hard as he could as the mods started to fire. Bullets were whizzing by his head and the mods were gaining. He had to think fast. Bryan ran into the crowded streets of Bungie General with the mods close behind. They couldn't fire their weapons as long as he was near civillians. Pretty soon the mods lost sight of him as masses of people walked past them. Bryan did not stop running until he found a long abandoned thread. He walked inside and sat down. He would be safe in here, for now. Bryan opened up his laptop, fired it up, put the CD-rom in, and put on his gloves. The code was still saved onto his computer. He inserted and debugged the code, and soon he had security camera views, history files, and multiple clearance to top-secret documents. He started typing... Meanwhile, at Bungie Headquarters, a group of Ninjas and Bungie Employees were gathered in their central office. "It seems that someone set off a bomb at Bungie General Maximum Security Prison," stated Recon 54. "Isn't that the same prison that Bryan Russel is in?" asked Pezz. "The guy who we banned for the murder of Reiginko?" "Yes. He also escaped," Recon replied. "That member is a threat to the entire community. But don't worry too much. I know of an old friend who can handle this." [b]One week later[/b] Bryan casually strolled into a hot thread, knowing that the mods might still be looking for him. A couple of Ninjas were even in the thread. He was extremely nervous; even so, he walked in and started having conversations with everyone there. He talked to every single person, but the mods didn't notice him yet. Finally he decided to start spamming. "I want teh reconz!!" he shouted loud enough for the whole thread to hear. "LOL! STFU noob! Qwerty!" Everyone simply shook their heads and resumed. But now Bryan could feel the barrel of a .45 calibur glock on the back of his head. He smirked as he saw that Buster Johnson was the one holding the gun. "I see." Bryan said. "So I was right all along." "Right about what, dead man?" Buster inquired. He was amused that his victim was so smug. "Well, I have it like this," Bryan started. "Bungie hired a mercenary, presumably you, to murder Reiginko and hide his body, probably because Reiginko could reveal information to the public now that he had resigned. But my friend and I found the body, so to cover things up, they had us banned. And now since I escaped from prison, they decided to hire you again to kill me." "I have no idea what you're talking about. All I know is that if I kill you I'll get 10,000 Microsoft Points." At this, Bryan stared laughing. "What's so funny, boy?" Buster was now agitaed. "It's just that you can't kill me," Bryan said. "Oh, no?" Buster had a sinister smile on his face. People screamed as the sound of the gun firing echoed through the entire thread. [Edited on 03.03.2008 5:39 PM PST]

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