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8/11/2007 8:54:28 PM
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When the destiny interferes with reality.

This is actually the first time i'm writting a story, that added to the fact that English is my second language, well.....please don't flame! If you think this sucks, then be nice. Anyway, this is just the beginning, so i'll add more when i got any free time. Ten years ago, in a remote American town, a man’s life ended. Nevertheless, this was not just any ordinary man, he had experienced hell, hes life was one of the most terrible, cruel and unforgiving that any human can ever experience, he was what some people liked to call him, a survivor. Sam Townshend was always a very calm, quiet boy, he didn’t had any friends, mostly because he didn’t want to, or he didn’t care about friends. He liked to be in his room, reading old books about death and how people handle it. This was one of the main reasons why Sam became a person with a very dark personality, he didn’t talked very much, even when someone asked him something, he would always give the shortest answer possible, we was a man of few words. At school, he had problems with all the subjects except one: Math, he was always the best of his class, and even the teachers could not understand how a 9-year-old boy could solve equations and problems that the students from high school could not. His life started to turn when he was 11. One day he was looking at the street from his room’s window, he was waiting for his parents to arrive home from a day of work, when the impossible happened, a 20-year-old guy, who was driving at an extremely high speed crashed against Sam’s parents car, killing them both. Sam watched his parents die. The next 3 months were very difficult for him, he was living with his grandparents, who he never really had a nice relation with, but after some time he adapted himself, and continued with his painful and pointless life, has he usually described it. He continued to live with his grandparents until he’s 19th anniversary. By this time he went searching for a job somewhere (he had dropped school after his parent’s death, but he helped his grandfather in an old local store, and each month he received a few dollars that he kept in he’s room, for future use). Twenty years later, he was living in a small town in the state of Indiana, he had found a lover, Lisa Garland, who was a nurse at the local hospital. Sam, now with 39 years old, was working at a local chop shop. Hes life was going well, they were both very happy with their lives, and they were planning to have a baby. But one day, he arrived home from work, and he couldn’t find Lisa anywhere, at first he thought that she had gone to the supermarket, but after a few hours he started to become worried, and he decided to go look for her. After a few minutes, he found her car on the side of a road, about nine miles off the town. The car was empty, and it had note on the driver’s seat, it said, help me, and it was written in blood. Sam looked at the forest and he started running towards it. It was starting to get dark, he needed to find Lisa as soon as possible, or he could lose himself in the dense forest. [Edited on 08.12.2007 5:50 AM PDT]
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  • Dude, even though this story needs some work, it's a good read. Nice job.

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  • Good job... [Edited on 08.11.2007 1:00 PM PDT]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee Dude, even though this story needs some work, it's a good read. Nice job.[/quote] Thank you, thank you very much.

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  • Yes, not bad...keep it coming.

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  • Good,, even though hes an EMO!

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  • That's a good story, where you from?

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  • Is this supposed to be a summary like experience. It would be better if you put in third or first person. Still good work. [Edited on 08.11.2007 1:02 PM PDT]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] hamdog Is this supposed to be a summary like experience. It would be better if you put in third or first person. Still good work.[/quote] No, no, it's not a summary experience. It's based in the game silent hill 2. Yeah, i'm from Portugal.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] game fan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] hamdog Is this supposed to be a summary like experience. It would be better if you put in third or first person. Still good work.[/quote] No, no, it's not a summary experience. It's based in the game silent hill 2. Yeah, i'm from Portugal.[/quote] Keep up the good work

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] fastmatt [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] game fan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] hamdog Is this supposed to be a summary like experience. It would be better if you put in third or first person. Still good work.[/quote] No, no, it's not a summary experience. It's based in the game silent hill 2. Yeah, i'm from Portugal.[/quote] Keep up the good work[/quote] Haha, thank you, i'm working on it,maybe tomorrow or monday i'll add more.

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  • Best thing you ever typed.....

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Camouflaged Best thing you ever typed.....[/quote] Probably.....

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] game fan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Camouflaged Best thing you ever typed.....[/quote]Probably.....[/quote]No, it is.....

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee Dude, even though this story needs some work, it's a good read. Nice job.[/quote] This isn't a true story?!?

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Camouflaged [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] game fan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Camouflaged Best thing you ever typed.....[/quote]Probably.....[/quote]No, it is.....[/quote] Yes, i agree, it is.

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  • Do you got Microsoft word?

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Camouflaged Do you got Microsoft word?[/quote] No, i use a piece of paper and a pencil, of course i use Microsoft Word. [Edited on 08.11.2007 1:27 PM PDT]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] game fan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Camouflaged Do you got Microsoft word?[/quote]No, i use a piece of paper and a pencil, of course i use Microsoft Word.[/quote]I'm a stranger to saracasmn, cause some of those mistakes need to be corrected through MSW

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] HappyRobot This isn't a true story?!?[/quote] >.> Mebeh.

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  • Added to the library.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Camouflaged [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] game fan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Camouflaged Do you got Microsoft word?[/quote]No, i use a piece of paper and a pencil, of course i use Microsoft Word.[/quote]I'm a stranger to saracasmn, cause some of those mistakes need to be corrected through MSW[/quote] Yeah, i rushed it.....don't worry, next part is gonna be better.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] HappyRobot This isn't a true story?!?[/quote] >.> Mebeh.[/quote] Yes, it's not real....so?

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] game fan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Camouflaged [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] game fan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Camouflaged Do you got Microsoft word?[/quote]No, i use a piece of paper and a pencil, of course i use Microsoft Word.[/quote]I'm a stranger to saracasmn, cause some of those mistakes need to be corrected through MSW[/quote]Yeah, i rushed it.....don't worry, next part is gonna be better.[/quote]K, we will see.....

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] game fan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] HappyRobot This isn't a true story?!?[/quote] >.> Mebeh.[/quote] Yes, it's not real....so?[/quote] At one point, you actually had me convinced that it was indeed real.... Until I hit the cliffhanger ending.... :'(

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  • couldn't be bothered reading it but im sure its wonderful.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] HappyRobot [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] game fan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] HappyRobot This isn't a true story?!?[/quote] >.> Mebeh.[/quote] Yes, it's not real....so?[/quote] At one point, you actually had me convinced that it was indeed real.... Until I hit the cliffhanger ending.... :'([/quote] So, that means it's a good story? [Edited on 08.11.2007 1:38 PM PDT]

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